高中试卷答案网八年级下册Units1-5书面表达专题 各单元范文
1．许多孩子喜欢吃零食，这是导致他们肥胖的主要原因之一。英语课上，老师引导学生就吃零食这一问题展开讨论。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文，简要谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1. 吃零食是一种坏习惯；
2. 科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人们摄取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易发胖。
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 可适当补充细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：snack n.零食 take in摄取 overweight adj.肥胖的；超重的
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例文
Most of the students in our class like eating snacks. I think it’s a bad habit. Snacks are delicious, but they are bad for our health if we eat lots of them. Do you know why Scientists say some snacks have too much fat and sugar. The more fat and sugar we take in, the more easily we will become fat. Becoming overweight can cause a lot of health problems and even illnesses. So in order to keep healthy, we shouldn’t eat lots of snacks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏作文提示里的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“大多数学生都吃零食”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“吃零食有害健康、科学家论证等”几个方面介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家少吃零食，保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①bad habit坏习惯
②delicious美味
③be bad for对……有害
④overweight超重
⑤health problems健康问题
[高分句型]
①the more fat and sugar we take in, the more easily we will become fat. (“the+比较级，the+比较”句型）
②So in order to keep healthy, we shouldn’t eat lots of snacks. (“in order to”引导目的状语)
2．如今，越来越多的人加入了周末的志愿者队伍，学生是否应该做志愿者工作呢？为此，上周五我对我们班的学生进行了调查，结果如下，请你代写一篇80词左右的调查报告。
Pros 60% (1)一种很好的体验，帮助得到梦想的工作 (2)消磨空余时间的好方法，以便于不会花时间做一些无聊的事，如玩电脑游戏 (3)更好地去了解社会(society)，学会关心别人
Cons 40% (1)浪费时间，影响学习 (2)家长担心结交一些不良朋友 (3)年龄小，容易累
我 ……
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例文
Should students do volunteer work on weekends We did a survey in our class meeting last Friday. Here are the results. 60% of the students think students should do volunteer work on weekends. It is a good experience and it can help students get their dream jobs. Doing volunteer work is a good way for students to spend their free time so that they won’t spend their time doing some boring things, such as playing computer games.
However, others disagree. They think it wastes their time and influences their study. Some parents also worry that students will make some bad friends. What’s more, students are too young, so they may get tired easily. I think it’s a good idea for students to do volunteer work. We can open up our eyes to the outside world. We can also improve our living skills. It’s good for our future.
【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是通过对学生的一项调查展开讨论，主要是以“是否应该做志愿者工作”为中心展开，把表格中表达的两种不同的资料表述清楚，同时还要自行发挥写出自己的观点意见，把这些写清楚即可。
2.例文点评：文章主要采取两段描写。第一段主要写表格中支持的观点，阐述清楚为什么支持做志愿者；第二段主要写表格中不支持做志愿者的观点以及自己的观点。整个文章思路清晰结构比较完整。语言层次感鲜明，表达准确，用词很恰当。
3．学生需要做家务吗？某校针对这个问题对200个学生做了一项调查。请根据下面的调查结果写一篇报道，开头已给出。
有必要（30%） 没有必要（70%）
1. 多数学生不会千家务活。 1. 学生的任务是学习而不是劳动。
2. 做家务可以锻炼吃苦耐劳的精神。 2. 学习任务繁重，没有做家务的时间。
3. 做家务可以体验父母的艰辛。 3. 做家务活是父母的事情。
你的看法：……
Is it necessary for students to do housework at home We did a survey about this. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文
Is it necessary for students to do housework at home We did a survey about this. According to the result, we knew most of the students (about 70%) thought it was not necessary for students to do housework. They thought it was the job of their parents. As students, their duty was to study hard. They had no time to do housework because of their heavy homework. On the other hand, some students (about 30%) thought it was good for them to do housework. Because they could learn a lot by doing it, and knew how hard their parents were. I think we students should spend some time on housework, no matter how busy we are.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据表格的调查结果写一篇报道，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出话题，讲述调查结果；
第二步，具体阐述不同学生的不同观点；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①According to根据
②have no time to do sth.没时间做某事
③be good for对……有好处
④spend time on sth.花时间在某事上
[高分句型]
①They thought it was the job of their parents.（宾语从句）
②Because they could learn a lot by doing it, and knew how hard their parents were.（原因状语从句）
③I think we students should spend some time on housework, no matter how busy we are.（宾语从句）
4．在一堂英语课上,老师组织全体同学开展有关“做家务”的讨论。假如下表是你做的小组讨论记录,请你根据这个记录用英语向全班同学做一个汇报。
Name Housework
Wu Jun Clean up his room
Jia Mei Help Mom cook dinner
Wang Ping Wash the clothes
I ...
要求:1.要点齐全、条理清晰,语句通顺;2.词数80左右。
例文
Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group. Wu Jun cleans up his room at the weekend and Jia Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother. Wang Ping sometimes washes the clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers.
In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some housework. Firstly, by doing it, we can help our parents and understand them better. Secondly, we can also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves and develop our abilities.
That's all. Thanks for listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求就“做家务”展开讨论。作者开门见山明确话题let me report the discussion work in our group，然后列举小组成员的观点，最后是自己的观点In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some housework，并给出三点理由。
2.例文点评：本文发言稿，用第一和第三人称展开叙述，时态是一般现在时；格式正确，内容充实，观点明确，理由充分，表达流畅，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：let sb. do sth., in our group, clean up, at the weekend, like doing, wash the clothes, in my opinion, do some housework, take care of.
高分句型：
1). Wu Jun cleans up his room at the weekend and Jia Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother.（并列结构）
2). it is necessary for us students to do some housework.（固定句型）
3). Now let me report the discussion work in our group（祈使句结构）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文中，As for me; Firstly; Secondly; Besides等词的运用，使作者的叙述很有条理。
5．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍历史人物岳飞的故事。
要点：
1．岳飞出生在一个贫穷的家庭。他从小非常喜欢看书，从书中学到了很多知识。
2．数年以后，岳飞参军。由于岳飞在军队中很优秀，后来成为了一名将领。岳飞领兵赢得了很多战争。
提示词：出生 be born 参军 join the army 优秀的excellent 将领captain
要求： 1. 80个词左右；
2. 必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
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范文
Yue Fei was born in a poor family. He liked reading very much when he was very young. He learnt a lot from different kinds of books.
Years later, Yue Fei joined the army and became a soldier. As a soldier, he was very excellent in the army, so he became a captain of the army. Yue Fei led the soldiers to fight with enemies and they won many wars.
Yue Fei was a great hero. We should learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并在此基础上进行适当的发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍岳飞的出生环境以及他的爱好；
第二步，介绍岳飞的参军情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① be born in 出生于……
② learn ... from 从……学到……
③ lead 带领
④ fight with 与……作战
[高分句型]
① He liked reading very much when he was very young.（like doing sth.喜欢做某事；when引导时间状语从句）
② he was very excellent in the army, so he became a captain of the army. （so 引导结果状语从句）
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