上海英语七年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）

上海英语七年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）
1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1)Which city do you like best
(2) Where is it
(3)Why do you like this city (Give at least two reasons)
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2．Wasfia Nazreen does a great job as a mountaineer. She has overcome a lot of difficulties and she has also done something special. Many people in your life have done quite well in their jobs as well. Please write about one of them with the topic “A good ______ (complete the topic with a job)”. What is his or her job How does he or she do the job What can you learn from him/her There need to be at least 60 words in your article.
上一篇文章中介绍的人物Wasfia Nazreen是一名出色的登山者，她克服种种困难登上七大洲的最高峰并且在那里转呼啦圈，以此鼓励自己国家的妇女儿童。你肯定也认识或者知道不少工作干得非常出色的人，请你以“一个好_______(用某一职业名称将标题补充完整)”为题，例如：“一个好医生、一个好老师、一个好警察……”，写一篇不少于60词的文章，写一写其中的一位。他/她做什么工作，他/她做得怎么样？你从他/她身上可以学到什么？
A good ________
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3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My _________’s job”. (以“我______的职业”为 题，写 篇不少于60词的短 ，标点符号不占格。
在疫情期间，我们居家学习， 进社区，对于身边的 有了更多的了解，也许这个 是你的爸爸妈妈、也许是你的亲戚，还也许是你的邻居……结合你 身，谈谈他的职业以及你 可以从他的身上学到什么呢？
(注意：短 中不得出现考 真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，也不得抄袭本试卷中的 章，否则不予评分。
My _________’s job
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4．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A Model Student” 以 “一位模范生” 为题，必须参考下列问题，写至少60 词短文，要求意思明确， 内容连贯，标点符号不占格子。
Suggested questions:
(1) Who do you think is a model student
(2) Why do you think so
(3) What can you learn from him/her
考生注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分，若必须出现姓名请以Mary或Tom等英文名代替。
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5．Write at least 50 words about the topic “I want to be a(an)…”(就“我想成为一名…”为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文。)
Suggested questions:
1.What do you want to be in the future
2.Why do you want to do this job
3.What should you do now to make your dream come true
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6．Suppose you have moved into a new flat, write at least 60 words on “My new flat” to describe it. 假如你搬去了一套新公寓，以“我的新公寓”为题写一篇介绍它的文章。文章不少于 60字。以下问题仅供参考(suggested questions)：
1. Why do you move to the new flat
2. Where is your new flat
3. How is your new flat
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7．假如你是Chen，下图是你和好朋友Amy的一些信息。请你用日记形式简要介绍你好友Amy，并介绍上周六你俩的活动。
好友国籍 加拿大
好友外貌 大眼睛；长卷发；等身高
好友爱好 拉小提琴；擅长游泳
上周六两人活动 去龙泉山（Longquan Mountain）旅行；天气晴朗；观看了日出（sunrise）
旅行感受 兴奋；想再次去
要求：不少于60词
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8．上个星期天，天气晴朗。你和父母去了乡下，看望了你的祖父母。他们住在农场。根据下表信息，请以“My last Sunday”为题写一篇短文介绍一下你上个星期天的活动。词数60左右。
on Sunday morning visit my grandparents; see some cows; feed some chickens
on Sunday afternoon pick some strawberries; take some photos
on Sunday evening go home; study for the math test; go to bed
要求：1. 需包含提示中的相关内容，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
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9．Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it.Write at least 50 words.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词）
Suggested expressions:
interesting places; It takes ... to do; I hope ...
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai,
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10．Suppose you are Kitty. Your best friend Lucy is going to Shanghai to spend the Spring Festival with you. Please make a 3-day holiday plan for her and write to Lucy to tell her about your plan. Complete the letter in at least 50 words. (假设你是Kitty，你最好的朋友Lucy准备来上海和你共度春节。请制定一个三天的节日计划并写信告诉她你的计划。用至少50个单词完成此信。标点符号不占空格，开头已给。)
You can begin like this:
Dear Lucy,
I’m so happy to know you’re going to spend the Spring Festival with me in Shanghai. I have made a 3-day holiday plan for us.
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参考答案：
1． 例文
Shanghai is my favorite city. It is the biggest city in China. Shanghai is located in the eastern part of China. The reasons why I like Shanghai best are as follows. First, it is the central city of our country. It is the center of economy, technology, industry, finance and trade. What’s more, Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. Tourists can enjoy shopping in Shanghai, and having local snacks as well. The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是哪个；
第二步，介绍城市的地理位置；
第三步，具体阐述喜欢这座城市的原因，至少两点。
【亮点词汇】①finance金融
②emerging新兴的
③profound深刻的
④monument遗址
【高分句型】①Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. (with+短语，表示伴随)
②The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.(where引导的定语从句)
2．范文：
A good teacher
I won’t forget my English teacher. His name is Zhang Lei. He is forty years old. He is very handsome. He likes his job very much. He is friendly to his students. His classes are always interesting. We all like English. He always helps us. He treats all of us as his own children. We should learn from our English teacher’s love for his own job. We all like our English teacher very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：标题要补充完整，要求包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍此人的个人信息以及工作；
第二步，介绍他/她的工作做得怎么样；
第三步，介绍你从他/她身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对某人友好
②treats all of us as his own children把我们都当自己的孩子看待
③learn from向……学习
[高分句型]
①We should learn from our English teacher’s love for his own job.（含有情态动词的句型）
3．例文：
My father’s job
My father is a nice man. He is an owner of a factory which produces many things. He is good at designing. He works very hard. I love him very much because he is friendly to me and he is patient with me. Sometimes, I can help him to do something in his factory. My father is always on business trips because he has his business everywhere. So it takes up much of his time.
Therefore, he doesn’t have any time to play with me but I don’t blame him for that. I often spend a lot of my time on the computer and learn much knowledge about designing from my father. And I will try to study hard like my father.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，写人的记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括爸爸的工作情况以及从爸爸身上学到的东西等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父亲的职业；
第二步，介绍父亲的品质以及工作中的表现；
第三步，最后是叙述自己从父亲身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长于
② be friendly to对……友好
③ take up占据
[高分句型]
① I love him very much because he is friendly to me and he is patient with me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② He is an owner of a factory which produces many things.（which引导的定语从句）
4．例文：
A Model Student
I think Mary is a model student in our class. Here are the reasons why I think so.
First, she is really a helpful and kind girl. She would help everyone when we have trouble in not only study but also life. She is always patient and warm-hearted. She is clever as well because she can always find a way to solve the problem. We all admire her. Second, she is hard-working. She gets up at five every morning and then runs and dances. She listens to teachers carefully and takes notes in class and finishes doing homework well after school. She practices the piano and singing every day.
What an excellent girl! I will try my best to study and make myself as perfect as her.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“What can you learn from him/her ”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己认为谁是模范生；
第二步，具体阐述自己这么认为的理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己能从对方学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不但……而且
②listen to teachers carefully认真听课
③do one’s best to do sth.尽最大努力做某事
④as...as像……一样
[高分句型]
①Here are the reasons why I think so. (why引导的定语从句)
②She is clever as well because she can always find a way to solve the problem. (because引导的原因状语从句)
5．例文：
I want to be a teacher
I want to be a teacher in the future, because I like children and I would like to teach children a lot of things. I want to tell stories to them and I also want to sing and dance with them. So I must study hard now. I will read many books and do a lot of exercises. I hope my dream can come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏问题中涉及的要点，以“I want to be a(an) ...”为题写短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题，可选择自己感兴趣的职业来填写，如teacher，nurse，policeman等；
第二步，正文具体介绍想要成为什么人，为什么项做这份工作及打算为此做些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be 想要成为
②in the future 在将来
③tell stories 讲故事
④come true 实现
[高分句型]
①I want to be a teacher in the future, because I like children and I would like to teach children a lot of things.（because引导原因状语从句；and连接表等同关系的并列句）
②I hope my dream can come true.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．例文：
I move to the new flat because my old flat is too small for all my things. My new flat is near an underground station, so I can go to different places easily. With two bedrooms and a balcony, my new flat is much bigger than the old one. And it is also very beautiful. What a nice flat I have!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示，介绍一下我的新公寓。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一下你为什么搬到新公寓；
第二步，描述一下你新公寓的位置；
第三步，最后描述你的新公寓如何。
[亮点词汇]
①move to移动到
②go to去
[高分句型]
①I move to the new flat because my old flat is too small for all my things.（“because”引导的原因状语从句）
②With 2 bedrooms and a balcony, my new flat is much bigger than the old one.（含“than”的比较级）
7．例文
My name is Chen. My good friend is Amy. She’s from Canada. She has big eyes. She has long curly hair. She is of medium height. She likes playing the violin. She is good at swimming. Last Saturday we went to Longquan Mountainon for a trip. It was a sunny day, so we watched the sunrise. We were both very excited. We’d like to go again next time.
【详解】1.题干解读。本文是一篇材料作文，讲述自己的好朋友Amy。写作时要包含好友的国籍、外貌、爱好，以及上周六两人的旅行及其感受这几个要点，缺一不可。
2.写作指导。写作时时态要用一般现在时介绍好友的特征，用一般过去时介绍两人上周六的旅行；写作时以第一人称来叙述；写作时要围绕主题，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
8．例文：
It was sunny last Sunday. On Sunday morning, I went to the countryside with my parents. We visited my grandparents. They lived on a farm. I saw some cows and fed some chickens there. On Sunday afternoon, we picked some strawberries and took some photos. On Sunday evening, we went home. I studied for the math test. Then I went to bed at ten. I was tired but happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是材料作文，写自己上个星期天去农场看望祖父母的活动。写作时需要包括写作要点，需包括上午，下午和晚上三个时间段作者的活动。
2.写作指导：写作时时态要用一般过去时；以第一人称来写叙述故事内容；写作时要意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯。
9．例文：
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai, I will meet you at the airport. Then I will show you around the Bund of Shanghai. You will see many famous buildings here. Of course, I will also take you to taste our local food. I will also show you around the museum. You can visit many historical relics here. I will also show you around Central Street. You can shop here. I’m sure you will have a great time. I look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求为你即将来上海旅游的朋友设计一份旅行计划书，计划应详细具体，注意不少于50词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用简单问候，引出下文的旅行安排；
第二步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb around带某人四处看看
②have a great time玩得高兴
③look forward to期望
[高分句型]
I’m sure you will have a great time.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear Lucy,
I’m so happy to know you’re going to spend the Spring Festival with me in Shanghai. I have made a 3-day holiday plan for us.
I will take you to the Bund on the first day. There are many beautiful landscapes there, and you will love them. In the afternoon, we will go to taste local delicacies and snacks. The next day, I will show you the famous scenic spots and learn about the history of Shanghai. On the third day, I will take you to go boating. We can also fish on the boat.
Hope you’ll have a good time in Shanghai.
Yours,
Kitty
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出话题，讲述制定三天的节日计划；
第二步，具体讲述三天的计划内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望对方在上海玩得开心”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb. sth.给某人看某物
②take sb. to do sth.带某人去做某事
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are many beautiful landscapes there, and you will love them. （There be句型）
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