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Unit 3 Safety 写作 专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册
1．（2015秋·湖北襄阳·九年级统考期中）书面表达。
回想你的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下许多美好回忆。以 “What should we do in English class ” 为题，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做才能使英语学习更有效。
提示：1. Listen to the teacher. 2. Take part in activities. 3. Be confident in ourselves.
词数：80字左右
参考词汇：take notes, work in groups….., never be afraid of……
What should we do in English class
In English class, we should _______________________________________________
2．（2015秋·浙江温州·九年级阶段练习） 假如你是王昆，你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题，写一封E-mail.，给他介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
1．要点包括：节日名称、节日简介、节日活动等；
2．字数要求：100字左右。
△Subject: My Favorite Festival From: Wang Kun
Dear Tom,
Wang Kun
【温馨提示】亲，做完后一定要仔细检查一遍。祝你马到成功！
3．（2015春·山东威海·九年级统考期中）书面表达
请用英语以 How I learn English 为题，写一段文章，谈一谈你学英语的方法，感受等。词数不少于80.
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4．（2015秋·重庆·九年级阶段练习）书面表达。
你是重庆某中学的学生，你很爱这所学校，学校有许多规章，谈谈你对其中几条的看法。
提示：
学生应做的事 学生不能做的事
穿校服到校 课间不能吃东西
可以到图书馆借书 不能损害图书
中午吃饭后到教室读书 不能用手机
1. I don’t agree with…
2. I think I should be allowed……
3. I could….if I ….
要求：1．词数：80词左右. 2. 语言流畅，无大的语法错误，书写工整。3.提示用完，可增加词语。
3．短文必须包括所有要点。
5．（2015秋·浙江杭州·九年级统考期中）书面表达
假设你是李华。时下,你校不少学生带手机上学。为此,你班组织了一次班会，讨论中学生上学是否有必要带手机。请你给英语笔友Tom写封信，根据下表提供的信息，客观地介绍讨论的情况。可结合你校实际进行适当发挥，并发表自己的看法。
一些同学认为
一些同学认为
你的观点
方便；时尚。
中学生自控能力差；玩手机浪费时间。
(请你实话实说)
注意：
1． 正确使用英文书信的基本格式。词数：120左右。
Dear Tom,
Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school. …
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
6．（2014·河南三门峡·统考一模）书面表达
假如你是Thomas, Jack 是你美国的一个笔友，前不久他写信告诉你他生活和学习上遇到的困难，希望你能给他提供一些帮助。请你根据下面一封E-mail, 写出你的建议。(80字左右)
Dear friend,
How is it going I am writing to tell you something about my problems. I really need you help. I am very upset every day. I have too much homework, and I always stay up very late. I also find some difficulties learning math. I am under too much pressure. I don’t want to communicate with my parents, they don’t understand me. I can’t do what I want to do. What should I do
Yours，
Jack
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you have so many problems in your life.
Yours
Thomas
7．（2015·北京顺义·统考一模）文段表达
根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
2015年4月13日，河南一位名叫顾少强的中学女教师向学校领导递交了一封只有10个字的辞职信：“世界那么大，我想去看看。” 她的这封信引起广泛关注。请你就此事给你的英国笔友写一封邮件，向他（她）简单介绍顾少强及她的决定，并谈谈你对此事的看法。
提示词：a letter of resignation, decide, give up, look round, agree,
8．（2016·浙江温州·统考一模）书面表达
李克强总理将“全民阅读”写入了《政府工作报答》，倡导全民热爱阅读。请根据提示用英文向English Post投稿，简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算。
阅读现状 一些国人不常阅读，有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用。
你的看法 阅读很重要，因为……(至少两点)
你的打算 ......（至少两点）
要求：1) 短文110词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2) 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
3) 文中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名。
Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people.
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9．（2016秋·北京通州·九年级统考期末）书面表达（共1小题）
假如你叫李华，你们学校正在举行课外阅读活动。请你根据以下提示，给你的美国笔友Daniel写一封邮件，告诉他你认为读书对于中学生来说重要吗，你经常读什么样的书，以及通过阅读你获得了什么。
提示词语：think, Chinese, English, interesting, learn, understand, enjoy
Dear Daniel,
How is it going At my school we’re holding some reading activities.
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What kind of books do you often read
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．What should we do in English class
In English class,we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary.Try to answer questions in English.
We should take part in all kinds of activities,like reading,writing,having discussions and playing games.We need to work in groups with our classmates to learn from each other.
It’s very important to be confident in ourselves. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes.In this way,we can make great progress.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，主要就英语课堂上应该怎么做才能使英语学习更有效。根据提示可知主要会描述三个方面的内容，上课认真听讲，积极参加活动，对自己有信心。另外也可以从做笔记，小组合作，等方面做补充。
写作亮点：这篇短文从三个方面描述了使英语学习更有效课上应该怎么做。首先是课上听课的注意事项：listen to the teacher carefully ， take notes， answer questions。其次从小组学习方面描述：take part in all kinds of activities，need to work in groups，learn from each other。最后从自信方面描述：be confident in ourselves，Speak English loudly，never be afraid of。虽然短文简短但是内容全面。全文富有逻辑，有条理。
考点：话题作文。
2．The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people.
Several days before the new year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.
On the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay new year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time.
【详解】试题解析：
这篇短文要求我们以“My Favorite Festival”为题，用英文写一封E-mail.，给Tom介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。其中应该包括：节日名称、节日简介、节日活动等；每位同学都有自己喜欢的节日和自己感兴趣的事情，所以大家应该都能说出一些有趣的节日。
【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求对我最喜欢的节日-—春节做了简单介绍，内容完整。2. 把过年前地准备和过年时的热闹都做了描述。
3．How I learn English
In recent years, learning English is gaining growing popularity with people in different ages. English is a global language. We use it in communication with people from different countries. Nowadays, English has almost become a necessity for everyone living. So learning English is very important to us.
Most of us may have such experience in learning English by reciting the words and learning grammars. I used to pay attention to written English so that I have ignored my spoken English. Gradually, I realized my mistake. I start to improve my spoken English now. I no longer confined to learn written English; I want to strengthen listening, speaking, reading and writing . Besides reciting the words and learning grammars, I talk with foreign friends and recite beautiful articles.
I firmly believe that, in the near future, my English skills will get to a high level！
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据要求，来介绍一下自己学习英语的感受和方法。题目中没有相关的信息，我们应用正确的英语将内容表达出来。这些信息包括自己的经历、做法和感受等，写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且所使用的词汇和句型，可以是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。
写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了自己学习英语的经验、看法和感受，结构清晰，要点全面。作者在写作时，短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如短语pay attention to 、 no longer、so that ，句型I used to 、副词Gradually、连词Besides等。
考点：命题类作文。
4．Hello, everyone. I’d like to tell you something about my school. I love my school. There are many rules in my school. For example, students must wear school uniforms. I think this is not necessary. Also, we can borrow books from the library. I think it is good for us because we can learn more knowledge from the books. What’s more, we must read in the classroom after lunch.
There is also something we can’t do. For example, we can’t eat during classes, and we can’t destroy books. We can’t take mobile phones to school, either. I agree with this because if we have mobile phones we will not pay our attention to our studies.
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们介绍一下自己学校里的一些规则，并且对其中的几条规则来发表自己的看法。题目中有一张表格，给我们列举了学校里的一些规则，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并且选择几条来发表自己的看法，表格下面给出了一些句型，我们可以用这些句型来发表自己的看法。在教材中我们也涉及过学校规则或是家庭规则这样的话题，因此写作时我们可以模仿教材中学过的结构和句型。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来表述。写作时尽量使用一些连词或短语，使全文意思连贯，表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求，根据表格的内容和给出的句型，讲述了自己学校里的一些规则，并对其中的一些发表了自己的看法，符合题目的要求，表达也很完整。在描写学校规则的时候，作者主要是分成了两个部分，一个是学生们应该做的事，另一个是学生们不能做的事。这样使得短文的结构非常清楚。同时从应该做的和不能做的中各选择了几个发表了自己的看法，有同意的，也有不同意的。短文中较好的句子有如For example, students must wear school uniforms. I think this is not necessary.、Also, we can borrow books from the library. I think it is good for us because we can learn more knowledge from the books、We can’t take mobile phones to school, either. I agree with this because if we have mobile phones we will not pay our attention to our studies等。
考点：提纲类作文。
5．Dear Tom,
Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
Some of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s a fashion.
However, others think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it’s easy to cause the students to vie(攀比，竞争) with each other. If necessary, they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.
In my opinion, as middle school students we should put all of our heart into our studies though following the fashion is understandable. What do you think of it
With best wishes,
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文是以写信的形式，注意其格式，认真审题，知道要点内容，把要点加以整理，用适当的句型进行概括；概括时可以主要用简单句，也可以适当用复杂句，但要确保复杂句使用正确；切记要点要全，不要遗漏；注意语法正确，单词拼写正确，字体干净。
写作亮点：范文运用一些常见短语Some of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends if they have a mobile phone.; In my opinion, as middle school students we should put all of our heart into our studies though following the fashion is understandable给文章增色不少。
考点：提纲作文。
6．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you have so many problems in your life. It’s natural that everyone will have problems, when you have problems you should try to overcome it and be happy. I think you should do your homework as quickly as possible in the daytime, try to go to bed before 10, it’s good for your health. I know math is a little difficult, if you want to learn it well you must listen very carefully in class, once you meet difficulties, you can ask the teachers or classmates for help, and do more math exercises. You also need to find some time to relax yourself. And you’d better talk with your parents more. Tell them your feelings, they are the people who love you best, try to understand them. Hope you will be happy again.
Yours，
Thomas
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如It’s natural that everyone will have problems, when you have problems you should try to overcome it and be happy. once you meet difficulties, you can ask the teachers or classmates for help, and do more math exercises.等，also等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：话题作文。
7．Gu Shaoqiang is a woman teacher in He Nan province. On April 13, 2015, she wrote a letter to her headmaster. She wanted to give up her teaching to look around the outside world.
I think everyone has different ways of life, as an adult, it’s normal for her to choose her own ways of life. The world is very beautiful, it’s well worth appreciating. If I were her, maybe I would also do like that. I agree to her decision.
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
考点：提示性作文
8．Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people.However,some Chinese people seldom do some reading in their spare time because they don’t have the habits of reading.Some say that they are too busy to do some reading.Others think that it’s useless to read.But I think reading is important in our life because we can get knowledge through reading.It can not only help open up a new world to us but also make us wiser.At the same time,we can improve our skills or get great fun from reading.So,I’m going to pay more for books,magazines and other kinds of reading materials.And I will also spend more time in reading every day.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。写作内容贴近学生学习，体现学生的思想，因此学生有话可写。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式、短语和连接词，这为文章增添了文采和层次感。
考点：话题作文。
9．Dear Daniel,How is it going At my school we’re holding some reading activities. I think reading books is important for students. The more you read, the more you know.In my spare time, I like reading novels. I often buy novels from bookstores and I also like to borrow them from the school library. I read both Chinese and English novels. My favorite Chinese novel is Journey to the West. Have you ever heard of it It is one of the four famous novels in Chinese literature. The story is full of imagination, and the main character Monkey King is very brave.From reading books, I know more about history and traditional culture. I also learn to understand things and people better.What kind of books do you often read Yours,Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇图表作文。要求考生根据图中所给的内容以及文字提示，对图中的问题进行回答以及阐述，写一篇连贯的作文。短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到语句通顺、意思连贯，主旨健康，中心突出。短文用一般现在时态，用第一人称进行表达。
考点：图表作文
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