Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth! 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版 英语九年级全册

Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth! 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级全册
1．保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。Wang Lin是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他，请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容要点如下：
1. 每天步行或骑自行车上学，不坐公交车；
2. 离开教室时，关灯、电视等；
3. 不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用；
4. 充分使用纸张，不使用塑料袋；
5. 就此话题补充1-2点个人做法。
注意：
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 内容连贯，不逐条翻译；
3. 词数60-80，标题已给出，不计总词数。
参考词汇：reuse重复使用，make full use of充分利用，plastic bag塑料袋
My Low-carbon Life
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．今年的五一黄金周异常火爆，各大景点人山人海，然而当游客走后却留下了满地狼藉。请结合你曾经的旅行经历以“Be a Civilized Visitor”（做文明游客）为题写一篇要点齐全,不少于80词的英语短文，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
要点提示：1.你去了哪里2.你目睹了哪些不文明行为3.你是如何做的4.你的倡议
Be a Civilized Visitor
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3．学校将举行 “给学弟学妹的一封信”的英语征文活动，建议他们如何做合格的中学生。你订算投稿，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文。
内容提示：
1.形成良好的学习习惯:听课、作业……；
2.保持健康的生活方式:起居、饮食……；
3.处理好和他人的关系:友善、分享、互助……；
4.其他建议……(两条以上)。
参考词汇：
1.form a good habit
2.in time
3.eating habit
4.relationship
5.share with
要求：
1.短文须包含以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥,使行文连贯；(参考词汇仅供参考）；
2.语句通顺,语法正确, 80词左右；(文章所给出的开头、结尾,不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和所在班级。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Now we will leave our school and enter a senior middle school. I have some personal suggestions to share with you________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.
4．今年入冬以来，以北京为首的各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。假如你是Li Hua，作为一个中学生，你对我国空气污染的看法是什么呢？请分析空气污染的现象、原因、应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。
要点提示：
1. 我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2点）
2. 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2点）
3. 减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2点）
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．地球一小时 (Earth Hour) 是世界自然基金会 (WWF) 应对全球气候变化所提出的一项全球性节能活动。提倡民众在每年三月最后一个星期六的晚上20:30熄灯一小时。请结合“爱地球, 不只一小时”这句话。谈谈你对这一活动的看法。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等信息。
2. 词数：110词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Earth Hour is a global event started by WWF, calling on people to turn off their lights for one hour. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．近几年来，随着国家的快速发展，我们居住的城市发生了很大变化并带来一些环境问题。请根据以下信息，以“My City”为题，写一篇英语作文，讲述城市的变化及人民生活水平提高所带来的环境污染问题并写出你对城市未来的期望。
生活条件 越来越多家庭有小汽车/许多家庭住进了宽敞的楼房
休闲娱乐 工作之余看电视、上网或微信聊天/假期到国内外旅游
环境问题 空气污染，水污染，噪音污染
未来期望 希望减少污染，节省能源，保护环境
要求：
1. 内容完整，意思连贯语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My City
In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿，需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及作为中学生怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示，以Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（不用抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域。）
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. _____________________________
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8．“我为地球添点绿”，保护环境, 人人有责。3月12日植树节，学校组织了植树活动。下面这幅图片呈现了同学们植树的情景。请根据图片信息，写一篇短文，向学校广播站英语栏目投稿。
内容包括：
1. 描述图片内容；
2. 谈谈你的感受。
注意：不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；词数控制在100左右。
9．环境正遭到越来越严重的破坏，日益恶化的环境也会给人类的生存带来不好的影响，所以我们应当竭尽全力来保护我们的地球。请根据下列图片提示，描述我们应该如何保护地球。不少于80词。
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10．The most likely reason for the outbreak of COVID-19(新型冠状病毒) in China in early 2020 is that people eat wild animals, causing great damage to China and the world. Please write a letter to the city mayor about your advice to protect our environment and wild animals.
The questions below may help you finish the task:
What are the problems
Where do the problems usually happen
What or who is causing these problems
What should we citizens do to solve these matters
What should government do to protect the environment and our health
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11．6月20日，你班组织了一场美化家园的义务劳动，主题为“To Be a Greener Person”。请结合分组情况用英语写一篇日记，并发表你的看法。词数80左右。
To Be a Greener Person
Group One collect rubbish
Group Two tell the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees
Group Three spread the importance on protecting the environment
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
June 20, Sunday Fine
This morning our class organized an activity called “To Be a Greener Person” in the nearby community. ________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文：
My Low-carbon Life
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
I go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking the bus every day. I always remember to turn off the lights and the TV when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. I sometimes plant trees with my parents to make our environment more beautiful.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇给定标题的作文。要求以“My Low-carbon Life”为题写一篇文章。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，主要采用第一人称来书写。第一段已给出，总述保护环境对我们很重要；第二段介绍具体的“低碳生活”的方式。在写作时，应该注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
2．例文：
Be a Civilized Visitor
Travelling is the best way to relax for many people including me. During this Labor Day, I visited Beijing with my parents. There were tons of people even beyond our imagination. Unluckily, lots of people threw rubbish everywhere though the dustbin is nearby. Some even walked and sat on the grass, and the grass was badly destroyed. Their bad behaviors really made me uncomfortable. So I picked up the rubbish and threw it into the dustbin. And I also advised the people not to destroy the grass and other public things. As a teenager, I think it’s necessary for us to be models of civilized visitors. Because we are the hopes of our country. We are supposed to follow the rules and stop other people’s bad behaviors. Then every one will try to behave well and always be a civilized visitor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态是“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。给出旅游的好处或者定义；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“五一见闻、不同游客的不同表现、建议”等几个方面具体展开叙述；
第三步，书写结语。表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①the best way to relax 放松的最佳方式
②beyond our imagination 超出我们的想象
③be badly destroyed 被严重破坏
[高分句型]
①Unluckily, lots of people threw rubbish everywhere though the dustbin is nearby.（副词修饰整个句子；让步状语从句）
3．例文：
Dear follow schoolmates,
Now we will leave our school and enter a senior middle school. I have some personal suggestions to share with you.
First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and hand in your homework in time. Second, good health is important. You need to get up early and go to bed early. Besides, you’d better have a good eating habit. Don’t eat junk food. Third, a good relationship can make us happyand comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sadness and happiness with others. Last, it is necessary for us to keep the school clean and don’t throw the rubbish here and there. We should exercise every day to keep healthy.
I hope you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求针对如何做一名合格的中学生的问题，在学习习惯、生活方式、社会交往、环境保护等方面给出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主，具体在学习习惯、生活方式、社会交往、环境保护等方面给出自己的建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
4．例文
Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people’s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What’s more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air. What’s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，行文连贯、表达清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍污染的现象及产生的原因；
第二步，介绍减少污染的措施；
第三步，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more而且
②cut down砍掉
③play a part in在……中起作用
[高分句型]
①Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air.（so连接的并列句）
②Protecting the environment is our duty.（动名词作主语）
5．例文：
Earth Hour is a global event started by WWF, calling on people to turn off their lights for one hour. The public is encouraged to turn off their lights for one hour at 20:30 p.m. on the last Saturday of March every year. Earth Hour aims to save energy for climate change. The environment around us is damaged by people, so we must try our best to save the earth. In this way, we can not only save energy effectively, but also protect the environment. So the government and many social groups are taking an active part in it. As middle school students we can start from little things right around us, such as saving water, using recycled paper, riding a bike or walk to school, planting trees, cleaning up the rubbish in the schoolyards or parks and so on.
Now please join us in Earth Hour.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示内容结合“爱地球，不只一小时”这句话谈谈自己对“地球一小时”活动的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“地球一小时”活动；
第二步，介绍自己对这一活动的看法及自己改如何做。
第三步，呼吁人们参与这一活动。
[亮点词汇]
①call on 号召
②aim to do sth. 目的在于
③try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
④take an active part in 积极参加
[高分句型]
①The public is encouraged to turn off their lights for one hour at 20:30 p.m. on the last Saturday of March every year. （一般现在时的被动语态；encourage sb. to do sth.；时间介词的用法）
②In this way, we can not only save energy effectively, but also protect the environment. （not only ... but also ... 连接并列谓语）
6．例文：
My City
In recent years, with the rapid development of our country, great changes have taken place in the city we live. More and more families have their own cars and have moved into big houses. In their spare time, they watch TV, surf the Internet and chat with friends on WeChat. During vacations, they go traveling home and abroad.
However, there are many environmental problems, such as air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution and so on. They are harmful to both people and animals. We should take action to protect the environment. By reducing pollution and saving energy, I’m sure my city can become more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“生活条件、休闲娱乐、环境问题、未来期望”等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，从生活条件和娱乐方面描述人们生活水平的提高；
第二步，转折，陈述城市变化带来的环境问题；
第三步，提出解决办法，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s spare time在空闲时间
②surf the Internet网上冲浪
③chat with sb与某人聊天
④home and abroad国内外
⑤take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①However, there are many environmental problems, such as air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution and so on.（用such as举例）
②By reducing pollution and saving energy, I’m sure my city can become more beautiful.（by+动名词短语，作方式状语）
7．例文
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible.
We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution, and make sure to always throw trash in the proper bins. By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，呼吁大家保护地球；
第二步，具体阐述作为中学生怎样保护环境；
第三步，最后宣讲环保的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference很有影响
②instead of代替
③make a positive impact on对……产生积极影响
[高分句型]
①To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.（动名词作宾语）
8．例文
Tree-planting Day is on March 12th. On that day, our school held a tree-planting activity. All of the students planted trees. Leilei, Mingming and I were in the same group. Leilei dug a big hole, Mingming put a tree into the hole. Then Leilei put the earth back in the hole again and Mingming pushed it down hard with his feet several times. At last, I watered the tree well. Although we were tired, we were very happy. Because we contributed to protecting the earth and adding green to the earth.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片信息以及提示内容，以“我为地球添点绿”为主题，写一篇短文，向学校广播站英语栏目投稿，呼吁人们保护环境；注意要仔细观察图片的内容，要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
9．One possible version:
Our living environment is getting worse and worse. The bad environment will make a bad influence on us, too. In order to have a better life, we should protect the earth from now on. What should we do to protect it
First, we should plant more trees and flowers. That will make our air cleaner and fresher. Second, we should save water and keep the water clean so that we can drink safely. Third, we should turn off the lights when we leave the room. Fourth, riding to school or work instead of driving a car is a better choice for us. I hope everyone can make an effort to protect the earth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点图片已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图片包含的信息”，适当拓展，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍“环境遭到严重的破坏，对人类的生存带来不好的影响”引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，我们应该做什么保护环境，重点介绍细节方法；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望每人都能为保护地球做出努力”的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make a bad influence对……有坏的影响
②in order to为了……
③instead of而不是
④make an effort做出努力
[高分句型]
In order to have a better life, we should protect the earth from now on.(so that引导目的状语从句)
we should save water and keep the water clean so that we can drink safely.(so that引导目的状语从句)
10．Dear mayor,
Since COVID-19 broke out in Wuhan in early 2020, the number of people infected and patients who have died kept increasing. It is reported that the epidemic has something to do with the killing and selling of wild animals at the South China Seafood Market. With the decrease of wild animals, many animals are endangered. Even worse, some of them may disappear forever.
There is no doubt that hunting and killing wild animals have a bad influence. For one thing wild animals are killed because of their fur, and it causes the imbalance of nature. For another, due to the contact between humans and wild animals, epidemics like SARS and pneumonia may infect humans easily.
As far as I am concerned, something must be done to stop this illegal action. First, Nature Reserves are supposed to be built so as to offer more living space to wildlife. Second, make sure that people will never hunt wild animals for food, as they are a part of the environment. Third, it is right time that we should raise people’s awareness of protecting wildlife. In this way, we can build a harmonious society and ensure the sustainable development.
Thanks for your time.
Yours sincerely
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示的问题，给市长写一封信，谈谈你关于保护环境和野生动物的建议。可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要符合书信格式，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称相结合来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；第一段表明问题；第二段分析问题；第三段表明自己的观点和建议；第四段以感谢结尾。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
11．例文
June 20, Sunday Fine
This morning our class organized an activity called “To Be a Greener Person” in the nearby community. The students were divided into three groups: Group One collected rubbish, Group Two told the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees, and Group Three spread the importance on protecting the environment.
Being a greener person means that we should try our best to pollute the environment less and be more friendly to the environment, which is easier said than done. To be a greener person, we should use bicycles or public transport services rather than driving our own cars or motorbikes. We should try to recycle what we use and try not to waste them. We can also be greener by saving water and electricity and so on. Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try our best and we will make a difference.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇日记写作，要求按照所给信息描述义务劳动的分工，并阐述自己的观点。写作时要按照题干中所给内容进行描写，紧扣题目，并适当发挥。写作时要先理顺内容，可以分为两层，第一层先描述每个组的工作内容，第二层阐述自己的观点。力争做到言简意赅，语句流畅。
2. 写作指导：动笔前要先构思写作要点，第一段主要采用第三人称，时态使用一般过去时来描述劳动的主要内容；第二段主要采用第一人称，时态使用一般现在时来发表自己的看法。为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
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