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Module 10 The weather 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语八年级上册
1．书面表达
请你根据表格信息，写一篇关于天气预报的短文，60词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
City Weather Temperature
Shenyang Sunny&Windy 15℃～ 4℃
Beijing Snowy 6℃～ 1℃
Nanjing Cloudy 6℃～9℃
Shanghai Rainy 2℃～11℃
Here's the weather report on January 15th. _______________________________________
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Thanks for your watching.
2．国家现在放开了二孩政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。
1．父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹；
2．有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等；
3．……
注意：70词左右；短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．我校要举办一个介绍我市的征文活动。请根据以下要点，适当发挥，写一篇80词左右的短文。 开头已给，不计入总词数。
1．阳江是个海滨城市，风光旖旎，气候宜人，近年发生了很大变化。
2．市政府一直很关注旅游业，举办了各种活动来推荐我市的名胜。每年有成千上万人来这儿旅游。
3．可以爬山、游泳、品尝美食，还能买精美礼品送给亲朋好友。
4．港城人友好且乐于助人，如果你有困难，可以向他们求助。
Would you like to travel in my hometown Yangjiang Let me introduce my hometown to you.
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4．书面表达
你（Li Ming）的美国朋友Jane打算来你居住的城市旅游。她想了解一下你市东方海滩的情况，根据以下信息给她写一封信加以介绍。
1.名称：东方海滩；
2.位置：城东10千米；
3.天气:秋天，既不冷也不热；
4.最适合的运动：游泳、打排球；
5.公用设施：洗手间、更衣室、商店；
6.交通条件:有多辆去海滩的公共汽车，可随时乘坐出租车。
Dear Jane,
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5．假如你(Lingling)的英国笔友Jim要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你给你的笔友写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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6．书面表达
假如你是Li Na，你要应聘某气象台的天气预报员一职，面试内容是根据下表内容写一篇天气预报广播稿。请你结合所学知识，根据表格内容，写一篇60—80词的天气预报广播稿。
要求：必须包括表格内的内容，可适当发挥。
Weather report for 12th, December
Places Weather Temperature
Morning Afternoon
southeast rainy sunny 10℃-16℃
southwest cloudy sunny 12℃-19℃
northeast cloudy snowy 0℃-4℃
northwest sunny sunny 3℃-9℃
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参考答案：
1．Here's the weather report on January 15th. Shenyang will be sunny and windy, and the temperature will be between 15℃ and 4℃. Beijing, snowy, and the temperature will be between 6℃ and 1℃.Nanjing will be cloudy. While the lowest temperature will be 6℃， the highest temperature will be 9℃. Shanghai will be rainy. The lowest temperature will be 2℃， and the highest temperature will be 11℃.
Thanks for your watching.
【详解】这是一篇预报天气的短文，所以首先确定本篇文章的时态为一般将来时。信息表中所给的几处地方的天气都要涉及到，描述天气时我们可以用到例如Shanghai will be… The temperature will be…等类似的句型。
本篇作文首先以“Here's the weather report on January 15th.”引出本篇短文的主题。下一段再分别按照先后顺序介绍到Shenyang，Beijing，Nanjing，Shanghai的天气，在介绍温度时分别用到不同的句型，例如the temperature will be between …and…以及the lowest temperature will be…， the highest temperature will be…。句子之间用and…以及while…等连词连接起来，使文章具有连贯性，是一篇比较优秀的短文。
2．I am the only child in my family. I can get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life. Two children may make noise at home. But children can learn to share something with others. They can look after each other. And they won't feel lonely. Anyway, I think two-child policy is good.
【详解】本文属于话题作文，表达针对国家开放二孩政策不同的人不同的观点，并阐述自己的观点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯、符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after、anyway以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，即“主将从现”原则，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯、用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如spend with、make noise、share...with...、look after以及“If I have a sister or brother, my parents won't spend much time with me and they will spend more money in daily life”等；然后紧扣要点、动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词等，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，例如if和anyway。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．例文
Would you like to travel in my hometown Yangjiang Let me introduce my hometown to you.
Yangjiang is a city near the sea with beautiful sights and pleasant weather. Great changes have taken place in recent years. The government always pays attention to the tour industry. Different kinds of activities were held to recommend the places of interest in my city. Every year, thousands of people travel here. You can go climbing, go swimming, taste delicious food and buy some nice presents for your friends and relatives. People here are friendly and helpful. If you have something difficult, you can ask them for help. You will have lots of fun here. And your visit will surely be unforgettable.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，题干已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读题干，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意叙述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上。语言的表述应该要符合语法结构，符合英语的表达习惯，适当的使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
2.写作指导：首先介绍一个城市，时态是一般现在时。整篇文章的内容题干基本已经给出，只需要正确的将意思表达出来即可。其中有些短语和词汇需要平常的积累，如发生：take place没有被动语态。
4．Dear Jane,
I'm glad that you will travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about the East Beach. The East Bench is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away from the city center. It's one of the best beaches in the world. The sand there is fine, soft and clean. The best time to go there is in autumn. Because it's neither too hot nor too cold. The water is clean, with small waves. It's suitable for swimming and playing volleyball.
You can get to the beach easily. Many buses can take you there. You can take a taxi, too. There are toilets, dressing rooms and shops. I think you will have a wonderful time there. Welcome to the East Beach!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】本题是一篇书信作文。注意书信格式。本文时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
亲爱的简：
我很高兴你能来我的城市。现在让我告诉你东方海滩的一些情况。东方海滩在我市的东部，离市中心10公里。它是世界上最好的海滩之一。那里的沙子很细、很软、很干净。去那里的最佳时间是在秋天。因为既不太热也不太冷。水是干净的，有小海浪。这里很适合游泳和打排球。
你可以很容易地到达海滩。许多公共汽车可以带你去那里。你也可以乘出租车。那里有厕所、更衣室和商店。我想你在那里会过得很愉快。欢迎来到东方海滩！
你的
李明
【点睛】本文是书信作文，注意文体格式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里。把所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式。写作六步法：1.审题：文体、时态、人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语、定语、连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。文中经典句型：Because it's neither too hot nor too cold. 使用了neither...nor结构表示“既不……也不……”。The East Bench is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away from the city center. 使用方位介词“in the east of”短语。
5．例文
Dear Jim,
I'm very glad that you'll come to visit China. You aske me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring,summer,autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It's often rainy. Compared to other seasons,winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows,you can come at this time of year. But it depends on your interest. I think the best time to visit China is in spring or autumn because the weather is not too hot or too cold. It's very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China,such as the Great Wall,the West Lake,Mount Tai and so on. I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Lingling
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向笔友Jim介绍中国的天气情况及来中国的最好时间等。
2.写作指导：本文以第二人称和第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。按照四季的情况来介绍中国的天气特点及来中国的最好时间。写作时要保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
6．例文：
This is the weather report of tomorrow. In the southeast it will be rainy in the morning and in the afternoon it’ll be sunny. The temperature will be between 10 and 16 degrees. In the southwest it will be cloudy in the morning and sunny in the afternoon. The temperature will be between 12 and 19 degrees. In the northeast it will be cloudy in the morning. But in the afternoon it will be snowy. The temperature will be between 0 and 4 degrees. In the northwest it will be sunny the whole day. The temperature will be between 3 and 9 degrees.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为广播稿；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“12月12日天气预报”表格中的天气预报要点，适当增加细节，完整表述天气预报内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明是哪天的天气预报，作为开头；
第二步，分地区从“上午、下午的天气、温度”几方面来详细进行天气预报。
[亮点词汇]
①the weather report of tomorrow 明天的天气预报
②between ... and ... 在……和……之间
[高分句型]
①In the southeast it will be rainy in the morning and in the afternoon it’ll be sunny.（will be结构的一般将来时；and连接表等同关系的并列句）
②The temperature will be between 0 and 4 degrees.（介词短语作表语）
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