题型五:书面表达
【全国视野】
1.假设你叫李华,是一个国际学校的九年级学生。你在浏览学校的学习论坛时发现了一个求助帖,请阅读这份求助帖并针对提出的问题,以A Kind Schoolmate的名义写一份回帖提供帮助。
要求:1.回帖必须包含所提问题的回复,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3.词数80词左右。
Sad and Worried Posted: (2 days ago) My problem I’ve been very sad these days. As a Grade 9 student, I’ll have the high school entrance examinations (中考) soon. But yesterday, I failed my math test again although I tried my best. Can you provide at least two great ways to improve my math grades quickly And because of my poor math grades, some of my best friends even laughed at me.That made me really angry, but I don’t want to lose our friendship. What should I do
Your Reply Re: Sad and Worried
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2.你校近期将举行有关“如何做一个新时代的优秀中学生”演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你为之准备一篇英语演讲稿。
内容要点如下:
1. 努力读书,关心时事;
2. 积极锻炼,保持健康;
3. 保护自然,从小事做起;
4. 积极参加活动,培养独立能力;
5. 补充一两点有关信息和个人想法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:60-80;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译。
参考词汇:healthy adj. 健康的 independent adj. 独立的 nature n. 自然
Good morning, my dear teachers and fellow students. My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.文明是城市发展的灵魂、文明是城市进步的标志。 “平江是我家, 文明靠大家!”作为中学生,我们应积极参与文明城市(civilized city)的建设。请根据下面给出的提示,写一篇短文。
1.尊敬老师,对人礼貌。
2.帮助他人,友善待人。
3.遵守交通规则,过马路走斑马线,不闯红灯。
4.保护环境,人人有责;不乱扔垃圾、不踩草地等。
提示词:respect(尊敬);be polite to;obey(遵守);traffic rule;zebra crossing(斑马线)
要求:1.词数80—100(开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2.短文应包括所提供的信息及要点,可适当发挥;
3.字迹工整,语句通顺,注意连贯,表达正确,逻辑清晰;
4.文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
5.请把文章写在答题卡相应位置的横线上。
Pingjiang is now making its effort to become a civilized city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.2022年“设计激活世遗”国际文创大赛作品征集活动即将开始。该活动面向全球征集以世界文化遗产为主题,兼具艺术性与实用性的文创产品。假设你是以下某一件文创产品的设计者,请你用英语为你的作品写一篇推介短文,简要介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现校名、人名等真实信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;
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5.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友John来信表示他对中国的剪纸 ( paper cutting) 很感兴趣。请你用英文回复一封邮件向他介绍剪纸。
要点:
1. 剪纸是中国传统技艺之一,受到人们的喜爱;
2. 剪纸有各种形状,如动物花和汉字 (character) 等;
3. 剪纸通常被贴在窗户门或者墙上,因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。
要求:
1. 必须包括所有内容要点,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数:80词左右,邮件开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope this e-mail will help you understand more about Chinese paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假定你是李华。你的英国笔友John对中国茶很感兴趣,请你根据以下要点,写一封邮件,介绍你在中国茶叶博物馆(National Tea Museum)的所见所闻。
1. 时间:五月二日
2.人员:你的一家
3. 主要活动:了解茶叶、学习制茶、欣赏茶艺表演……
注意:1. 邮件必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
3. 词数:80—100词左右。邮件格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
茶艺表演 tea art performance
Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese tea.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.体育中考结束了,这对每个同学而言都是一次难忘的经历。请结合以下提示,谈谈你的收获。
提示:1.What do you learn from the experience
2.How can they help with your study
参考词汇:health; courage; strong will
要求:1.文章包括提示内容并适当发挥;
2.文章中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.词数 80 个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Recently, the P. E. exam has been over.
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8.艺术陶冶情操,涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么,有过怎样的经历,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art plays an important role in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.在我们的学习和生活中,我们时时刻刻要面临或大或小、或易或难的选择,而正确的选择毫无疑问可以帮助我们成长得更快更好。或许你也曾纠结于勤奋与懒惰、坚强与软弱、坚持与放弃。那么,最终你是如何选择的呢?请以“A Good Choice”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英文写一篇短文。
1.要点:①你面临的困境是什么;
②你是如何选择的;
③你的感受如何。
2.要求:①词数在100左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
②文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
A Good Choice
Life is full of choices, and there are many important and meaningful choices in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.水滴石穿,绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情,成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing”为题,根据提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿,参加毕业典礼的心得分享活动。
﹡What do you always keep doing
﹡Why do you keep doing that
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注意:1. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
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参考答案:
1.例文
I know from the letter that you are worried about your math grades. Now let me tell you what to do.
First, you should like it. Interest is the best teacher. Whatever you do, you should like it. Secondly, if you have any questions but you don’t ask your teachers or friends, I think you are wrong. You should always ask questions. If you do this, you will make great progress. In addition, you and your classmates form a study group to discuss together. In this way, I think you will improve math scores quickly. As for what you said that the students laughed at you, it may be your own feeling of great psychological pressure. You should communicate with your classmates and ask them more questions. Throw away your sadness and worry, and be happy. I think they will help you.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给求助帖的内容,针对其问题,以A Kind Schoolmate的名义写一份回帖提供帮助。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明自己会帮助对方解决问题;
第二步,具体阐述如何帮助对方解决问题。
第三步,最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②In addition此外
③As for至于
[高分句型]
①If you do this, you will make great progress.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I think you will improve math scores quickly.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.例文:
Good morning, my dear teachers and fellow students. My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First of all, studying hard to get knowledge and skills is our students’ main task. Besides, we are supposed to care about what’s happening all over the world. At the same time, we should exercise a lot to stay healthy. As we all know, protecting nature is our duty, so we need to start from small things. Last but not least, we are expected to take an active part in activities to develop our independent abilities.
All in all, we should try our best to improve ourselves. Thank you for listening.
【详解】1.题干解析:题目要求写一篇60词到80词的英语演讲稿介绍如何做一个新时代的优秀中学生。题目给出的内容要点需要全部包括在内,文章开头已给出,要注意上下文衔接。
2.写作指导:本文时态主要使用一般现在时,人称使用第一人称。文章可以分为三段,第一段原文已给出,第二段介绍具体如何成为一个优秀的新时代中学生,第三段总结自己的想法,适当使用短语和句型,增加文章亮点,不要出现单词和语法错误。
3.范文:
Pingjiang is now making its effort to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn’t step on the grass and climb the trees. Litter mustn’t be thrown everywhere.
Pingjiang is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的提示写一篇短文谈谈作为中学生的我们,在“文明城市的建设”中应该如何做。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:本文应以一般现在时和第一人称来行文。可分为三段行文:第一段点题;第二段详细介绍我们应该怎么做;第三段以号召大家结尾。确保内容全面,行文连贯,条理清晰,文中无单词和语法错误。
4.例文
Fans are widely known, among which folding fans are the most famous and most Chinese. In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children. Today, I recommend folding fans.
Folding fans are easy to carry because they are foldable. They are the most popular and almost everyone has one in ancient times. The folding fan can be opened and closed freely. When it is opened, it can be used. When it is closed, it can be hidden. It has the meaning of advancing and retreating freely and being carefree.
Because the folding fan is both artistic and practical, it can not only cool the fan, but also watch and play. Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.
Folding fans is refined and elegant, with integrity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为产品推介;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意选择其中的一个作品作为自己的产品进行推介,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。从所给的产品中选择一件作为自己的产品,然后介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先提出自己要推介的产品——折扇;其次具体介绍折扇的文化内涵;接着介绍折扇的作用。
第三步:书写结语。表示“折扇是儒雅风流,气节风骨”。
[亮点词汇]
①the most famous最著名的
②the meaning of……的含义
③not only…, but also…不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children.(that引导的宾语从句)
②Folding fans is easy to carry because they are foldable.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.(which引导的定语从句)
5.参考范文
Dear John,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting.
I love paper cutting, too. Paper cutting is a kind of traditional Chinese art. It has a very long history. And it’s popular among Chinese people. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings. Many people put paper cutting on their front doors, the windows and walls of their houses. People often decorate their homes with paper cutting because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck.
I truly hope this e-mail will help you understand more about Chinese paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是电子邮件写作,根据给出材料介绍中国的剪纸技艺,开头结尾已给出,正文可以用一段介绍。
2.写作指导:本文主要以第一人称和第三人称书写,时态是一般现在时。介绍时可多应用复合句,注意人称和数的变化,保证内容完整,上下文连贯,单词拼写正确。
6.例文
Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in Chinese tea. I hope my trip to National Tea Museum can interest you.
On May 2nd, my family and I went to National Tea Museum. It is one of the most interesting museums that I’ve ever been to. At the museum, 1 learned some information about tea and I knew who had invented the tea. When I saw there are many different kinds of tea, 1 just couldn’t believe my eyes. We also learned how to make tea there. At last we watched a tea art performance. It was enjoyable to watch the tea preparation as well as drinking the tea. I’ve finally realized why my grandpa loves drinking tea so much!
Why don’t you come to China and experience it yourself
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:该文属于信件,写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;按照汉语提示写成英语文章;详写参观中国茶叶博物馆的所见所闻,可适当补充以吸引朋友的更大兴趣及对中国茶文化的热爱。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述参观经历;时态采用一般过去时为主,一般现在时和现在完成时作辅助;描述参观经历时需要心理描写以表达作者情感;适当使用过渡词、句、复合句使文章更丰富、优美。
7.例文
Recently, the P. E. exam has been over. Through this exam, I learned a lot. I used to be fat. I was tired when I ran. But for the exam, I exercise with my friends every day. After half a year’s efforts, I am very healthy now. And I’m not tired at all. I like running and sports very much. It also makes me understand that as long as I work hard, there is nothing I can’t do. And through exercise, I can sleep well every day and I can have enough energy to study the next day. My learning efficiency has also improved. In the future, no matter how busy I am, I will actively exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给英文问题提示介绍你体育中考的经历以及你的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你从这次的经历中学到了什么;
第二步,介绍这次的经历对你的学习有什么帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②not...at all一点也不
③make sb do sth使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It also makes me understand that as long as I work hard, there is nothing I can’t do.(that引导的宾语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句)
②In the future, no matter how busy I am, I will actively exercise.(no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
8.例文
Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites.
According to my grandparents, I looked forward to flying. One year, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.
As I’m growing older, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents’ hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.
Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:采用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据图片内容,阐述自己最喜欢的艺术以及怎样的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述自己最喜欢的艺术形式;
第二步,阐述自己的经历;
第三步,总结艺术的魅力。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to期盼;
②make sb adj.使某人……;
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.(when引导时间状语)
②With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.(with复合结构)
9.例文:
A Good Choice
Life is full of choices, and there are many important and meaningful choices in our life.
When I was about 6, my mother sent me to learn ballet. I was so happy about the choice at first, because I like the beautiful dresses. But then I was so tired of training that I just wanted to play. My mother always pushed me so hard and I even wanted to stop learning. However, I knew I really loved dancing and I wouldn’t give up easily. After thinking again and again, I chose to keep learning ballet. I never regretted the choice. I am proud of myself because I have a special skill and the spirit of persistence. A good choice makes me a better person.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,写自己曾经历的一次困境以及自己的选择以及感受,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作,时态以一般过去时为主,写作时要点齐全,不要遗漏,针对细节可适当发挥,行文确保语句通顺,无单词拼写和语法错误。
10.例文
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that knowledge may be acquired through many ways, and the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broadens their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival. Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题,讲述自己坚持做的事是阅读;第二段介绍为什么一直坚持阅读;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
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