Unit 5 Do you have a soccer ball
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1.请根据提示信息,用英文介绍一下你的好朋友Jim。
要点提示:
(1)喜欢体育运动;
(2)有7个篮球、6个棒球、3个排球、4个足球、8个网球拍以及2个乒乓球拍;
(3)每天都进行体育运动,在电视上看足球赛。
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【答案】例文
I have a good friend. His name is Jim. He likes sports. He often plays sports with his friends. He has seven basketballs, six baseballs, three volleyballs, four footballs, eight tennis rackets and two table tennis rackets. He plays sports every day. He also likes to watch football on TV.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。内容是根据提示信息,用英文介绍一下你的好朋友Jim。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍好朋友喜欢体育运动;其次介绍朋友有有7个篮球、6个棒球、3个排球、4个足球、8个网球拍以及2个乒乓球拍。
第三步:书写结语。朋友每天都进行体育运动,在电视上看足球赛。
[亮点词汇]
①plays sports with与一起运动
②every day每一天
③like to do sth.喜欢做某事。
[高分句型]
①He often plays sports with his friends.(play with和……一起玩……)。
②He also likes to watch football on TV.(like to do sth.喜欢做某事。)
2.假设你是李华,刘伟和赵娜是你的好朋友。请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你们三个各自喜欢和不喜欢的运动,并简要说明理由。
要求:50词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Name Li Hua Liu Wei Zhao Na
Like basketball volleyball tennis
Dislike ping-pong soccer baseball
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【答案】例文
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I like basketball. It’s interesting. I don’t like ping pong. I think it’s boring. I have two good friends. They are Liu Wei and Zhao Na. Liu Wei likes volleyball. He thinks it’s relaxing. He doesn’t like soccer. It’s difficult for him. Zhao Na likes tennis. She thinks it’s fun. She doesn’t like baseball. She thinks it’s boring.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给表格提示内容,分别介绍你们三个各自喜欢和不喜欢的运动,以及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的运动以及理由;
第二步,介绍刘伟喜欢和不喜欢的运动以及理由;
第三步,介绍赵娜喜欢和不喜欢的运动以及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①be difficult for对……来说是难的
[高分句型]
①I think it’s boring.(省略that的宾语从句)
3.假设你叫Jenny,下面是英语课上你做的关于“Do you have balls ”的调查表,老师让你根据调查表的内容写一篇60词左右的短文并发表在校刊上。
Name Jenny Gina
Has two soccer balls ten ping-pong balls and three bats
Ideas (观点) relaxing interesting
Doesn’t have volleyball volleyball
Ideas difficult boring
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【答案】例文:
My name is Jenny. I have a friend. Her name’s Gina. We both like sports. I like soccer and I have two soccer balls. I think it’s relaxing. I don't have a volleyball. I think volleyball is difficult. Gina has ten ping-pong balls and three bats. She likes ping-pong very much. She thinks it is interesting. But she doesn’t have a volleyball. She doesn’t like volleyball. She thinks it’s boring. Gina and I always watch sports on TV.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据表格内容写文章介绍Jenny和Gina的体育爱好的收藏。
2.写作指导:写作时要以一、三人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。文章可采用一段式写作:第一步,引入话题;第二步,介绍自己和朋友Gina所拥有的体育用品及其看法;最后,进行总结。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4.假如你有三个好朋友,Dale,Bill,Anna。请根据下表中所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文,描述一下他们收藏体育用品的情况以及他们对相关运动的看法。60词左右。
Dale two basketballs interesting
Bill one baseball, two volleyballs easy
Anna five ping-pong balls, three soccer balls difficult
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【答案】参考范文:
I have three friends. Dale likes playing basketball. He thinks it is interesting and he has two basketballs. Bill has one baseball and two volleyballs. It is easy for him to play baseball and volleyball. Anna has five ping-pong balls and three soccer balls, but she doesn’t like playing ping-pong or soccer. They are difficult for her. She only watches them on TV.
【详解】1.题干解读:该写作属于材料作文,要求根据表格信息提示,描述Dale,Bill和Anna三个人收藏体育用品的情况以及他们对相关运动的看法,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时,人称以第三人称为主;时态用一般现在时;写作要点要包含两点,一是描述每个人收藏的体育用品;二是每个人对体育运动的看法。注意保证语言的连贯性,无拼写和语法错误。
5.假设你是你们学校器材室的管理员,请根据下面表格中的内容,用英语向前来参观的几名外国交换生介绍一下你们学校的球类用品、数量及学生对这些运动项目的喜好情况。
篮球 足球 排球 乒乓球拍 乒乓球
20个 12个 25个 40个 150个
要求:50词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our school has a lot of sports things. Look at these balls in this room._____________________________________
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【答案】Our school has a lot of sports things. Look at these balls in this room. We have 20 basketballs and 12 soccer balls. Boys like playing basketball and soccer. They think they're relaxing. We have 25 volleyballs. Girls like playing volleyball. They think it's interesting. We have 40 ping-pong bats and 150 ping-pong balls. Boys and girls like playing ping-pong. The students play sports after school.
【详解】本篇作文属于图表作文,主要介绍一下学校的球类用品、数量以及学生对这些项目的喜爱情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用了时态语态和主谓一致,特别是一些亮点词句,如a lot of, like playing, relaxing, interesting和play sports等,增加了逻辑关系,增强了上下文的意思连贯性,用词准确,句子通顺。
【分析】分析:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
6.书面表达
根据提示写一篇50词左右的英语短文介绍一下你的朋友Jim。
提示:
1.他的体育用品:10个篮球、4个足球、2个乒乓球、15个排球、9个棒球、8个网球拍;
2.他最喜欢打网球;
3.他喜爱运动,因为运动对健康有益;
4.他经常放学后和他的朋友们打网球和篮球。
参考词汇:健康health;网球拍tennis racket
Jim has a great sports collection(藏).
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【答案】Jim has a great sports collection(收藏). He has 10 basketballs, 4 soccer balls, 2 ping pong balls, 15 volleyballs and 9 baseballs. He doesn't have a ping pong bat, but he has 8 tennis rackets. His favorite sport is tennis. He likes sports very much because he thinks sports are good for our health. He often plays tennis and basketball with his friends after school.
【详解】这是一篇要求介绍自己的朋友Jim。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称,一般现在时态,注意谓语动词的正确使用,这是难点;注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
7.假如Dale,Bill和Anna是你的好朋友,请根据下表中所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文,描述一下他们收藏体育用品的情况以及他们对相关运动的看法。可适当拓展,60词左右。
Dale two basketballs interesting
Bill one baseball, two volleyballs easy
Anna five ping-pong balls, three soccer balls difficult
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【答案】参考范文
I have three good friends. Dale likes playing basketball. He thinks it is interesting and he has two basketballs. Bill has one baseball and two volleyballs. It is easy for him to play baseball and volleyball. Anna has five ping-pong balls and three soccer balls, but she doesn’t like playing ping-pong or soccer. They are difficult for her. She only watches them on TV.
【详解】题干解读:该写作属于材料作文,要求根据表格信息提示,描述Dale,Bill和Anna三个人收藏体育用品的情况以及他们对相关运动的看法,可适当发挥。
写作指导:写作时,人称以第三人称为主;时态用一般现在时;写作要点要包含两点,一是描述每个人收藏的体育用品;二是每个人对体育运动的看法。注意保证语言的连贯性,无拼写和语法错误。
8.根据下表信息,介绍你和你的朋友的体育爱好。可适当增加合理的信息和内容。
You basketball interesting
ping—pong ball difficult
Your friend, Dale soccer fun, difficult
volleyball easy
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【答案】范文:
I have a basketball. I like playing basketball because it is very interesting. I also like playing ping—pong ball. But I think it is too difficult for me.
My good friend, Dale, has a soccer ball. He likes it very much. He thinks it is fun, but it is also a little difficult. He also has a volleyball. He often plays it after school. It is so easy for him.
【详解】题干解读:题目要求根据表格信息,介绍你和你朋友的体育爱好。要求包含表格所有信息,且适当发挥。
写作指导:此文用一般现在时,以第一人称和第三人称口吻为主。采用两段式格式:第一段:介绍自己的体育爱好,并说明理由;第二段:介绍朋友的体育爱好,并说明理由。
9.假如你是赵江,刘伟和赵娜是你的好朋友。请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你们三个各自喜欢和不喜欢的运动,并简要说明理由。
要求:词数60左右。
姓名 赵江 刘伟 赵娜
篮球 排球 网球
乒乓球 足球 棒球
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【答案】例文:
Hi, I’m Zhao Jiang. I like basketball. It’s interesting. I don’t like ping pong. I think it’s boring. I have two good friends. They are Liu Wei and Zhao Na. Liu Wei likes volleyball. He thinks it’s relaxing. He doesn’t like soccer. It’s difficult for him. Zhao Na likes tennis. She thinks it’s fun. She doesn’t like baseball. She thinks it’s boring.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据表格中的内容以赵江的名义,分别介绍自己和两个好朋友刘伟、赵娜三人各自喜欢的运动及不喜欢的运动,并阐述喜欢及不喜欢的理由。
2.写作指导:本文主题为“喜欢和不喜欢的运动”;以第一人称介绍自己喜欢及不喜欢的运动,以第三人称介绍刘伟和赵娜两人喜欢及不喜欢的运动;本文时态为一般现在时,注意主谓一致问题;注意写作顺序,保证逻辑清晰,条理清楚。
二、话题作文
10.根据汉语提示及要求,以 My Sports Collection为题用英语写一篇短文。
提示:1. 你有50个篮球、20个网球拍、30个棒球、40个足球、25个排球;
2. 你经常进行运动。
要求:(1)条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、书写规范;
(2)不少于30个单词。
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【答案】My Sports Collection
I like sports so much that I have all kinds of balls in my collecting room. There are fifty basketballs, twenty tennis rackets and thirty baseballs. I also have forty footballs and twenty-five volleyballs. I often play sports.
【详解】写作思路:既然写My sports collection, 那么理所当然我很喜欢体育运动,所以开头以我喜欢运动开篇点题,后文再逐一说明我所拥有的各种球类,在描述球类时可以用到There be句型,或者是I have…., I also have….等句型,最后做出总结,收尾呼应。本篇作文首先开篇点题I like sports so much that I have all kinds of balls in my collecting room.接下来逐一列出所拥有的各种球类,There are fifty basketballs, twenty tennis rackets and thirty baseballs. I also have forty footballs and twenty-five volleyballs.还运用了不同的句式,避免了句式重复使用,最后用I often play sports.作为最后总结。文章符合写作要求,内容全面,思路清晰。
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