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Part IV Writing
妙笔生花——读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Dream for Future
People were busy in their own laboratories on Mars. Turtex told me，“Let us go to the Earth to have a cup of coffee.”
I laughed for such a childish joke and I also jokingly asked him，“Is there no coffee shop on Mars ”
He replied，“It has but they can’t prepare coffee as tasty as that on the Earth. ”
However，for a while I thought it would be better to take a cup of tasty coffee from Ramu’s Coffee Shop located at our village，Kushmandi.
Turtex told me to enter a room near his laboratory. We entered there and found that the room was internally coated with some materials like sponge. Turtex closed the door of the room with a clap. I saw some colorful buttons inside the room. After a few seconds I heard another clap and noticed that the door opened.
Turtex said，“Come with me. ”
I asked，“Where ”
He replied，“Now we are at Kushmandi. ”
I shouted，“What ”
We came out of the room and I astonishingly viewed the skyscrapers around me. Turtex said loudly，“What’s wrong with you Come with me. ”
Eventually we entered a coffee club designed like a Five Star Restaurant. Suddenly I noticed a display board with an electronic text on，“Welcome to Kushmandi. Now you are in famous Ramu’s Coffee Shop. Enjoy the taste of the best coffee on the Earth. ”
Suddenly many hazy and crazy questions came to my mind.
“What was the nearby room of the lab How was it possible to travel an enormous distance from Mars to the Earth Is it like opening my favorite TV channel with a remote How did the poor coffee stall of our village turn into a Five Star Coffee Club In which century were we ”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Thinking such hazy things，I followed Turtex into the coffee club. __________________________________
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The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left. _______________________________________________
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步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键
前文概要
审体裁：本文是一篇科幻故事，属于记叙文。
审时态：一般过去时
审前文大意以及要点：
Turtex和作者从火星来到地球上喝咖啡，因为地球上的咖啡比火星上的咖啡更加美味。作者和Turtex进入了实验室附近的一个房间，瞬间来到了Kushmandi。结合故事的结尾，作者感到困惑，脑海中出现了许多问题。
步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节
①第一段所给首句：Thinking such hazy things，I followed Turtex into the coffee club.
提示句1提到作者跟着 Turtex 走进了咖啡店，续写部分应该描写他们进入咖啡店之后发生的事情。
②第二段所给首句：The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left.
提示句2提到服务员端来了两杯咖啡，然后离开了。本段应该描写作者品尝咖啡的过程。既然是科幻故事，续写的故事应该有一个出人意料的结尾。因此，如何构思一个巧妙而且符合逻辑的结尾也是本文续写的关键。
步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节
话题激活词汇
地点：laboratory，Mars，the Earth，coffee shop，Ramu’s Coffee Shop，Kushmandi
动作：have a cup of coffee，laugh，ask，reply，prepare，taste，locate，notice
心理活动：be busy in，a childish joke，jokingly，astoni-shingly
句式翻译
1. 咖啡的香味扑鼻而来。（主谓状）
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2. 我渴望立刻喝一杯！（主系表状）
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3.我仍然沉浸在那些模糊的问题中，我跟着Turtex坐在一张桌子旁边。 （as引导时间状语从句）
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4. 桌子上覆盖着奇怪的材料，我等待着享受地球上最好的咖啡。（and连接的并列句）
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5. 咖啡太热了，我的嘴像是烫伤了。（主系表）
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6. 最后我意识到我在Kushmandi的乡村医院而不是咖啡俱乐部。（宾语从句）
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步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级
1.把第2句升级为how引导的感叹句
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2.把第3句升级为过去分词短语作状语的句子
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3. 把升级后的第3句和第4句再次升级为which引导的定语从句
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4.把第5句升级为so... that...句式
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5.把第6句升级为It is...that...强调句型
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步骤五：高分在即——连句成篇，认真誊写并仔细检查
Thinking such hazy things，I followed Turtex into the coffee club. __________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left. _______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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步骤三
句式翻译
1. The delicious smell of coffee rushed into my nose.
2. I was eager to have a cup of it at once!
3.As I was still absorbed in those hazy questions，I followed Turtex and sat beside a table.
4. The table was coated with strange materials，and I was waiting to enjoy the best coffee on the Earth.
5. It was too hot and it seemed that my mouth got burnt.
6. I nally realized that I was in our village hospital at Kushmandi not the coffee club.
步骤四
1.How eager I was to have a cup of it at once!
2.Still absorbed in those hazy questions，I followed Turtex and sat beside a table.
3. Still absorbed in those hazy questions，I followed Turtex and sat beside a table，which was coated with strange materials，waiting to enjoy the best coffee on the Earth.
4.It was so hot that it seemed that my mouth got burnt.
5.I finally realized that it was our village hospital at Kushmandi that I was in，not the coffee club.
步骤五
Thinking such hazy things，I followed Turtex into the coffee club. The delicious smell of coffee rushed into my nose. Oh，my loveable tasty coffee. How eager I was to have a cup of it at once! “Come here，” Turtex said. Still absorbed in those hazy questions，I followed Turtex and sat beside a table，which was coated with strange materials，waiting to enjoy the best coffee on the Earth.
The waiter brought us two cups of coffee and left. Impatiently I took it and took a sip. “Oh. My gosh. ” It was so hot that it seemed that my mouth got burnt. But then I heard a hair-cutting sound. I slowly opened my eyes and found that a nurse was cutting my hair，putting it into a tray beside my bed and telling me，“Nothing serious. It needs just two stitches on your forehead and you will be OK within a week. ” I finally realized that it was our village hospital at Kushmandi that I was in，not the coffee club.
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