课时把关练
Part IV Writing
妙笔生花——应用文写作
假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Jenny发来邮件,向你介绍了她最喜欢的动物——袋鼠,同时希望你给她介绍一下你最喜欢的动物。请你根据以下要点给她回复邮件。要点如下:
1. 最喜欢的动物是什么;
2. 生活在什么地方,以什么为食;
3. 外貌、习性等;
4. 其他。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使文章连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
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Yours,
Li Hua
步骤一:审题构思——分析透彻很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文是一封电子邮件,文章为介绍最喜欢的动物;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第三人称;
3.确定时态:以一般现在时为主。
二、构思
首先:介绍最喜欢的动物是什么。
然后:介绍该动物的外貌、习惯、栖息地等。
最后:根据所介绍的动物自由发挥。
步骤二:精挑细选——核心词汇想周全
1. __________________以……为食
2. __________________过去是
3. __________________建立
4. __________________……的数目
5. __________________被誉为……
步骤三:遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现
1. 我最喜欢的动物是大熊猫,它是黑白相间的。(主系表)
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2. 大熊猫主要以竹笋和竹叶为食,主要生活在四川省的山区。(主谓状)
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3. 尽管可能看上去笨拙,但它们能爬上很高的树来躲避天敌。(though引导的让步状语从句)
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4. 近年来,我们已建立了几个自然保护区来保护大熊猫,其数量正在增加。(主谓宾)
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5. 大熊猫深受中国人民的喜爱,被誉为中国的国宝。(主谓宾)
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步骤四:斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点
1. 把第1句升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句
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2. 把第2句升级为含有现在分词短语作状语的句子
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3. 把第3句升级为倒装句
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4. 把第4句升级为含有被动语态的句子
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5. 把第5句升级为含有过去分词短语作状语的句子
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步骤五:连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇
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课时把关练
Part IV Writing
参考答案
步骤二
1. feed on 2. used to be 3. set up 4. the number of... 5. be known as
步骤三
1. My favourite animal is the giant panda and it is black and white.
2. Giant pandas mainly feed on bamboo shoots and leaves and mainly live in the mountains in Sichuan Province.
3. Though they may look clumsy,they can climb high trees to escape their enemies.
4. In recent years,we have set up several natural preserves to protect giant pandas and the number of them is increasing.
5. The Chinese people love giant pandas and they are known as the national treasure of China.
步骤四
1. My favourite animal is the giant panda,which is black and white.
2. Giant pandas,mainly feeding on bamboo shoots and leaves,mainly live in the mountains in Sichuan Province.
3.Clumsy as they may look,they can climb high trees to escape their enemies.
4. In recent years,several natural preserves have been set up to protect giant pandas and the number of them is increasing.
5.Known as the national treasure of China,giant pandas are loved by the Chinese people.
步骤五
Dear Jenny,
My favourite animal is the giant panda,which is black and white. Giant pandas,mainly feeding on bamboo shoots and leaves,mainly live in the mountains in Sichuan Province. Clumsy as they may look,they can climb high trees to escape their enemies. Giant pandas used to be endangered. In recent years,several natural preserves have been set up to protect giant pandas and the number of them is increasing. Known as the national treasure of China,giant pandas are loved by the Chinese people.
Yours,
Li Hua
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