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上海市部分区2023-2024高三上学期期末考试(一模)英语汇编:概要写作(含解析)

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概要写作
2024届上海市虹口区高三上学期一模英语试卷
Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
71. Will Plant-based Protein Continue to be an Appetizer in Food World
A good vegan milk needs to look like milk and taste like milk, whether it' s a fatty version, preferred by bakers, or a skimmed one, favored by the health-conscious. For years, manufacturers of plant-based protein have had trouble hacking this delicate imitation game and it seems that they are winning back a bit. The global revenues (收益)from alternative proteins could reach $290 billion by 2035 and that is a cautious estimate. However, can it last
Unlike those early products, which were neither terribly tasty nor particularly nutritious, cleaver( 剁 肉 刀 )processing improves textures, additives boost taste and a pinch of specially engineered peas and beans adds nutrient in the latest products. Still, ultra-processed substitutes seldom match animal proteins in nutritional value. Animal products, including milk, are better for children' s bone development, though lab- grown versions of meat or dairy are becoming more nutritious. Meanwhile, green-minded consumers are realizing that plant-based does not necessarily mean sustainable in that it still takes a lot to obtain raw materials. Farming almonds(杏仁)to make a milk-like drink, for example, uses huge quantities of water.
Plant-based proteins are also a tough sell in giant markets like India, where diets are already rich in plants and vegetables, or Nigera, where meat-eating is a sign of wealth. That limits their global appeal.
All these suggests that alternative proteins have far to go to replace the animal kind. The limitations may be weighing on the firms involved. Oatly's market value has fallen by about 80%since its listing, partly because of production difficulties. That of Beyond Meat, whose burgers feature in McDonald' s latest menu, is down by 90%from its peak. Plant-based foods may no longer be only an appetizer in diets, but their maker remain one in food business.
2024届上海市崇明区高三上学期一模英语试卷
IV. Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
71. Call a Physical Therapist
You get up from the sofa and - ow! Back pain takes your breath away. Do you reach for the pain pills No! Call a physical therapist instead!
More and more, physical therapy, or PT, is a common go-to for treating aches and pains. A physical therapist can treat almost any injury to give a patient a better quality of life. When it comes to treatment, one size does not fit all. A physical therapist personalizes a treatment plan based on their observations and the patient’s concerns. The goal is to help injured or ill people improve movement and manage pain, so they can live life to the fullest. These therapists work with patients who suffer from back or neck injuries. They help people recover from broken bones and surgeries as well as work- or sports-related injuries. Physical therapists also teach people how to stay in shape and prevent further injuries. Their hands-on (动手的) therapy includes strengthening or stretching exercises, ice or heat and more.
No one can become a physical therapist without getting a doctor of physical therapy degree. After completing it, a person must pass a professional license exam before beginning to practice. Further, being a physical therapist can be mentally and physically draining because of the hands-on, personalized patient care required. A successful physical therapist needs to have great communication skills and an eye for detail. They should also be creative problem solvers as well as resourceful.
For those looking for a satisfying career, PT is one to consider. The demand for the profession is growing faster than that of many other careers. Private clinics and hospitals hire physical therapists. Sports facilities and professional sports teams also employ them. Therapists may work in skilled nursing facilities or visit patients in their own homes. If someone wants to see the world, they may want to become a travel physical therapist.
2024届上海市金山区高三上学期一模英语试题
IV. Summary Writing
71.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Benefits of Green Spaces
We all know the value of taking a walk in the fresh spring weather. It allows your mind to relax and forget about the problems in everyday life. Studies have commonly shown the benefits of being around green spaces, including gardens, urban parks and forests.
But did you know that being in contact with these natural surroundings during childhood could positively impact your mental health as an adult A study by the Institute for Global Health surveyed 3,600 people from all over Europe.
The all-adult study gave participants a questionnaire (问卷) on how frequently they used natural spaces during childhood — for example, playing in a garden or riding a bike at the park. They were also asked about the importance they put on using such places. Volunteers were then given a psychological test, which included a variety of questionnaires and problem-solving activities, to analyze their nervousness and feelings of depression within a four-week period. The results consistently showed that the people who were more exposed to natural spaces had higher mental health scores compared to those with lower childhood exposure — as did those who attached higher importance to using green spaces. The study’s assistant, Wilma Smith, wrote that the results “show the importance of childhood exposure to natural spaces for the development of a nature-appreciating attitude and a healthy psychological state in adulthood”. She also stressed the importance of “recognizing the implications of growing up in environments with limited opportunities for exposure to nature”.
According to the study, 73 percent of Europe’s population only has limited access to natural spaces. So we call on policymakers to improve the availability of natural spaces for children.
While this study was based in Europe, a lack of green space can affect anyone, anywhere. So remember to make time to expose yourself to nature, as your mental health is just as important as the physical one.
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2024届上海市奉贤区高三上学期一模英语试题
IV. Summary Writing
Directions:Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
How to Be a Better Boss
Workplaces have changed dramatically over the past few years. Teams have become more isolated owing to remote work. Technology has brought great benefits but also constant interruptions, from endless Zoom calls to message flows on Slack. With each shift, the job of the manager has become harder. Many report feeling burnt-out, overloaded and confused.
Yet in real life everyone suffers when management is bad and benefits when it is good Research based on a long-running survey of management techniques has found that well-managed firms tend to be more productive, export more and spend more on research and development.
So the prize for better management is big. But how to obtain it Read enough management books and you might conclude that managers need to change their personality thoroughly, becoming either Machiavelli's prince or a Marvel superhero. However, study successful managers, and more practical lessons can be drawn.
One is to be clear about a firm's processes. Managers should make clear the purpose of a team, what a meeting should achieve and who will take a decision. Meeting agendas at GSK, a British drugs firm, clearly say whether an item is for awareness, to gather participants' input or intended to make a decision. Such clarity means that everyone knows what they are doing, and why.
Management isn't all about piling up tasks, meetings or processes. A second lesson is that managers can add value by deleting. Sparing workers from pointless meetings, emails and projects frees them to concentrate on the work that fattens the bottom line. At the start of the year, Shopify, an e-commerce firm, deleted 12,000 repeated meetings from its employees’ calendars. The useful ones were eventually added back. But the firm says that meetings are down by 14% since the mass deletion while productivity has gone up by a similar amount.
2024届上海市黄埔区高三上学期一模英语试题
IV. Summary Writing
Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Why companies are hiring ‘prompt engineers’
With the new generative AI tools, like ChatGPT, anyone can put in a prompt — type in a few words and get a result. But that doesn’t mean that the results will be relevant or accurate.
The key is putting in the right prompt. That’s why some businesses are now hiring prompt engineers — people with the skills, background and practice to talk to so-called large-language AI systems effectively — and why many people expect prompt engineering to be a desirable skill for many kinds of workers to add to their résumés.
In general, the more detailed the request, the closer the response will come to what the user is looking for. But the most effective prompt engineering goes beyond adding detail.
For one thing, adding the right detail to get the best response is crucial. Also, there are many ways to guide how an AI system presents the information it finds, depending on the goal — telling it to write in a certain style or for a certain audience, for instance. Each tool also has particular capabilities and limitations that users can learn to tackle. And the best results often come from an extended conversation with the AI, reacting to what it produces and asking for refinements.
Even for people applying to jobs that don’t clearly mention prompt engineering, having this skill could become essential for all sorts of roles. Art directors could use generative AI to outline ideas, and marketers could use it to develop new slogans. Software engineers could use it to find problems with their code. Lawyers could use it to research a piece of law. This is going to be a foundational skill that all of us need to know. The through line is when you learn a new skill, you can take it in any direction you like.
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2024届上海市虹口区高三上学期一模英语试卷
51.
The booming plant-based protein industry faces challenges. Plant-based meat can never be as nutritious as animal-produced protein. Besides, its manufacturing process is not that sustainable, for cultivating plants is resource consuming. Its sale may also meet setbacks in some countries due to their dietary habits. This uncertainty is reflected in the declining market values of relevant enterprises.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。植物蛋白质作为替代动物蛋白质的产品在近年来逐渐受到关注,但其在营养价值、口感等方面仍有待提高。尽管在一些市场上取得了成功,但在像印度和尼日利亚这样的市场中,对植物蛋白质的需求相对较低,限制了其全球市场的扩展。因此,植物蛋白质虽然已经不再只是餐饮市场的一个附属,但其生产商仍需要在食品行业中努力摆脱小众地位。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①For years, manufacturers of plant-based protein have had trouble hacking this delicate imitation game and it seems that they are winning back a bit.
②Still, ultra-processed substitutes seldom match animal proteins in nutritional value.
③Meanwhile, green-minded consumers are realizing that plant-based does not necessarily mean sustainable in that it still takes a lot to obtain raw materials.
④Plant-based proteins are also a tough sell in giant markets like India, where diets are already rich in plants and vegetables, or Nigera, where meat-eating is a sign of wealth. That limits their global appeal.
⑤The limitations may be weighing on the firms involved. Oatly’s market value has fallen by about 80% since its listing, partly because of production difficulties. That of Beyond Meat, whose burgers feature in McDonald’s latest menu, is down by 90% from its peak.
2.缜密构思
将第1、5两个要点进行重组,将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
The booming plant protein industry is facing challenges.
Plant-based meat can never have the same nutritional value as animal-produced protein.
In addition, its manufacturing process is not sustainable because growing plants consumes resources.
Sales may also encounter setbacks due to the dietary habits of some countries.
This uncertainty is reflected in the declining market value of related companies.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Its sale may also meet setbacks in some countries due to their dietary habits. 句中包含介词短语作状语的结构,表达高级。
[高分句型2] This uncertainty is reflected in the declining market values of relevant enterprises.句中包含一般现在时被动语态结构以及介词短语作状语的结构,表达非常高级。
2024届上海市崇明区高三上学期一模英语试卷
71.One possible version:
Physical therapists offer personalized treatment to improve injured people’s quality of life. They also teach people to keep fit and avoid further injuries. To become a physical therapist needs to meet many requirements like a doctor’s degree, a professional license, good communication skills, sensitivity for detail and creative problem-solving skills. Currently, there’s a growing demand for physical therapists.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,物理治疗师提供个性化的治疗来改善受伤患者的生活质量。他们还教人们保持健康,避免进一步的伤害。要成为一名物理治疗师需要满足很多要求,比如博士学位、专业执照、良好的沟通技巧、对细节的敏感和创造性的解决问题的能力。目前,对物理治疗师的需求不断增长。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①More and more, physical therapy, or PT, is a common go-to for treating aches and pains. A physical therapist can treat almost any injury to give a patient a better quality of life.
②Physical therapists also teach people how to stay in shape and prevent further injuries.
③No one can become a physical therapist without getting a doctor of physical therapy degree. After completing it, a person must pass a professional license exam before beginning to practice. Further, being a physical therapist can be mentally and physically draining because of the hands-on, personalized patient care required. A successful physical therapist needs to have great communication skills and an eye for detail. They should also be creative problem solvers as well as resourceful.
④The demand for the profession is growing faster than that of many other careers.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说,将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
Physical therapists offer personalized treatment to improve injured people’s quality of life.
They also teach people to keep fit and avoid further injuries.
To become a physical therapist needs to meet many requirements like a doctor’s degree, a professional license, good communication skills, sensitivity for detail and creative problem-solving skills.
Currently, there’s a growing demand for physical therapists.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To become a physical therapist needs to meet many requirements like a doctor’s degree, a professional license, good communication skills, sensitivity for detail and creative problem-solving skills.运用不定式作目的状语对原文第三段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Currently, there’s a growing demand for physical therapists.用there be句型对最后一段进行了概括。
2024届上海市金山区高三上学期一模英语试题
71.One possible version:
Researches show exposure to nature during childhood has a positive impact on mental health in adulthood. Those using natural spaces more frequently and attaching greater importance to using them score higher in psychological tests including problem-solving abilities and negative feelings’ analysis. Therefore, availability of natural spaces should be improved by governments and being exposed to nature should be highlighted.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,研究表明,童年时期接触大自然对成年后的心理健康有积极影响。那些更频繁地使用自然空间并更重视使用自然空间的人在心理测试中得分更高,包括解决问题的能力和消极情绪的分析。因此,政府应该改善自然空间的可用性,并强调与自然接触。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①But did you know that being in contact with these natural surroundings during childhood could positively impact your mental health as an adult A study by the Institute for Global Health surveyed 3,600 people from all over Europe.
②Volunteers were then given a psychological test, which included a variety of questionnaires and problem-solving activities, to analyze their nervousness and feelings of depression within a four-week period. The results consistently showed that the people who were more exposed to natural spaces had higher mental health scores compared to those with lower childhood exposure — as did those who attached higher importance to using green spaces.
③While this study was based in Europe, a lack of green space can affect anyone, anywhere. So remember to make time to expose yourself to nature, as your mental health is just as important as the physical one.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说,将第2、3要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
Researches show exposure to nature during childhood has a positive impact on mental health in adulthood.
Those using natural spaces more frequently and attaching greater importance to using them score higher in psychological tests including problem-solving abilities and negative feelings’ analysis.
Therefore, availability of natural spaces should be improved by governments and being exposed to nature should be highlighted.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those using natural spaces more frequently and attaching greater importance to using them score higher in psychological tests including problem-solving abilities and negative feelings’ analysis.运用现在分词作定语对原文第三段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Therefore, availability of natural spaces should be improved by governments and being exposed to nature should be highlighted.用动名词作主语对最后一段进行了概括。
2024届上海市奉贤区高三上学期一模英语试题
参考例文01:
Changes in workplaces have made managers feel pressured. But good management often brings better-performing companies, so managers should learn to be good bosses. According to the study of successful managers, managers should make clear a firm’s processes to the staff so that everyone knows what to do. Also, they can boost productivity by deleting pointless tasks for the employees. (59)
参考例文02:
The passage discusses the challenges faced by managers in the changing workplace and the importance of effective management. It highlights the benefits of good management, such as increased productivity and investment in research and development. The passage suggests that managers should focus on clarity in team processes and eliminate unnecessary tasks and meetings to improve productivity. Practical lessons from successful managers are emphasized.
原文文本结构:
引言:工作场所的变化和管理者面临的困难。
重要性:研究表明良好管理的公司更具生产力、更多地进行研发和出口。
如何实现更好的管理:明确队目标和会议目的的重要性。
管理者的附加价值:通过删除冗余任务和会议来提高生产力。
概要写作框架:
这篇文章主要讨论了如何成为一名更好的老板。由于工作环境的变化管理者面临着更大的困难。研究表明,良好的对公司的影响非常大,包括更高的生产力、更多的研发和出口。为了实现更好的管理,管理者需要明确团队的目标和会议的目的,并意识到删除冗余任务和会议可以提高生产力。
2024届上海市黄埔区高三上学期一模英语试题
【参考答案01】
A right prompt can ensure a satisfying result from generative AI tools, so companies are hiring prompt engineers. Besides details, it’s important to tell the system how to present the information according to your goal, to handle the system’s capabilities and limitations and improve the result through communication. Prompt engineering is an essential skill across multiple industries. (57 words)
【参考答案02】
Companies are hiring prompt engineers who have the skills and practice to effectively communicate with large-language AI systems. Prompt engineering involves providing detailed and precise prompts to generate relevant and accurate responses. This skill is becoming desirable for various job roles, as it can be applied in fields such as art direction, marketing, software engineering, and law research. (58 words)
原文文本结构:
Introduction: 谈论新的生成AI工具,指出输入正确的提示是关键。
Hiring Prompt Engineers: 解释一些公司正在雇佣prompt engineers,并解释他们的作用。
Effective Prompt Engineering: 讨论有效的提示工程如何超越添加细节。
Applications of Prompt Engineering: 概述了prompt engineering技能在不同领域中的应用。
Conclusion: 总结了prompt engineering技能的重要性以及学习新技能的好处。
概要写作框架:
引言:简述新的生成AI工具和如何使用它们。
“Prompt engineering”是什么:定义prompt engineering并解释其重要性。
有效的提示工程:讨论如何编写适当的提示,以获得准确的响应,包括指导AI系统呈现信息的方式和通过与系统进行交互来优化输出。
应用:列举prompt engineering技能在不同领域中的应用。
结论:总结prompt engineering技能的价值,以及学习新技能的益处。

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