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08:【好题精选】书面表达-2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练(第一期)(江苏苏州含答案)

08:【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练(第一期)(江苏苏州)
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.成长过程中总有令你难以忘怀的经历,或悲伤,或惊喜,或害怕,或自豪……请以“An unforgettable experience ”为题,用英语写下这段难忘的经历。
注意事项:
1.短文须自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数在100个左右,短文标题已给出,不计入总词数;
3.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
An unforgettable experience
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2.真善美是每个时代都会倡导的主题。真善美是每个时代会倡导的主题。一个充满爱心的人无论走到哪里,都会像火光一样温暖和照亮他/她周围的世界!假如你是李明,你们学校正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动,请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2. 100 词左右。标题和文章开头已给出, 不计入总数。
Giving is Receiving
I’m a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.在成长过程中,我们都会遇到各种各样的问题和烦恼。请以“My growing pain”为题,用英语写下你成长过程中的问题或烦恼。故事需包括问题和解决。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名,校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
My growing pain
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4.每个人都曾收到过礼物,它可能是一本书,一张卡片,一个篮球……在你心中,你曾经收到的最珍贵的礼物是什么?请根据要点提示,以The best gift I have received为题写一篇英语短文,讲述你和你最喜爱的礼物之间的故事。
要求:
1. 词数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
The best gift I have received
The best gift I have received is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
5.本届冬奥会是科技的盛会,各种高科技频繁亮相,无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机,让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此,科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华,学校正在举办科技节,你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求:1. 要点齐全,适当发挥;
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数:80~100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
6.每段人生都有永不褪色的回忆。你学习,运动,旅游,交友,玩耍……其中有快乐,有悲伤,有趣味,有感动,有后悔,有惊喜,有骄傲……
请以“An unforgettable thing”为题,写一篇记叙文,将你的故事与我们分享。
内容包括:
1. What happened to you (what, when, who, where… )
2. How was it going on /What did you do then
3. How did you feel at last /What did you get from this experience . . .
注意:1. 词数100,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I!
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7.近年来,一些年轻人热衷于庆祝万圣节等西方节日,相反,中国的各大传统节日却受到“冷落”。对此现象,请以“The Return of Chinese Traditional Festivals”为题写一封倡议书。
内容包括:
1. 你观察到的现象;
2. 你对此现象的观点或想法;
3. 你的建议举措。
注意:
1. 词数100;
2. 文章须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:
文化自信cultural confidence;弘扬中国文化promote Chinese culture
The Return of Chinese Traditional Festivals
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8.假如你是李华,你校“英语之声”栏目正在举办“My Favorite Saying”征文活动。请你根据内容提示,写一篇英语短文参赛。
内容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的一句格言;2. 你的亲身经历或感悟。
要求:
1. 字数:100词左右;2. 可以适当增加内容, 以使行文连贯。
温馨提示:你可从下列格言中任选一句,也可选择你喜欢的其他格言。 1. Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成) 2. My life is a reading list.(我的人生就是一张阅读清单) 3. A good friend is like a mirror.(好朋友像一面镜子)
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9.莎士比亚曾说过:“本来无望的事,大胆尝试。往往能成功。”你在生活中,学习上是不是也有许多新尝试 请以“A new try”为题,根据以下提示和要求,谈谈你的第一次尝试。
提示:
(1) What did you try to do
(2) How did you do it
(3) What do you think of the experience
要求:
(1)短文须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A new try
Every time we try something new, we will learn something and improve ourselves. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 你对该谚语的理解;
2. 你生活中的一个事例(例如:运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面);
3. 你的感悟,
注意:1. 词数100,短文开头已给出,不计人总词数;
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect” I mean ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.水滴石穿,绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情,成就更好的自己。请根据下面的“One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day”为题,并根据所给内容和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括:
(1)What do you keep doing every day
(2)Why do you keep doing it
(3)How does it influence or change you
要求:(1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
(3)词数为80—100词。
One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day
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12.在我们的成长历程中总会遇到这样那样的困难。阳光总在风雨后。你校英语俱乐部组织了“How to Face Difficulties”的征文比赛,请根据下面要点提示,写一篇英语短文参赛。
1. What kind of difficulty did you have
2. How did you solve it
3. What have you learnt from it
注意:1.紧扣话题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2.词数100左右,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名及其他相关信息。
It’s common to have difficulties in life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.“天行健,君子以自强不息”。在我们的生活和学习中,每个人都应力求进步,奋发图强,永不停息!某英文网站正在开展以“自强不息”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈自己力求进步,自强不息做某事的经历,以及自己的感受。
·提示词语:try one’s best,improve,succeed,proud
·提示问题:What problem did you meet
What did you do to solve it
What have you learned from the experience
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三、书信作文
14.假如你是阳光中学的一名九年级的学生Shirley,你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr. Smith,告诉他你想推荐Sandy做你们班的班长。请根据下列信息,写完这封信。
姓名 Sandy
性格 聪明:能保持一切井井有条。总是想出好主意。 勤奋:总为班级做额外的工作。 有条理:从不忘记自己需要做的事。 乐于助人:乐意随时帮助别人。
爱好 喜爱阅读:因为可以从书上学到很多。 最喜欢的颜色是蓝色:因为蓝色给我们的身心带来宁静,能使人们放松;当别人生气时,也能使他们平静下来。
注意:
1.词数90左右,已经给出的不计词数。
2.根据要点提示可以适当增减,注意句意连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith, I’m writing to recommend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.
Sandy___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think Sandy is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Shirley
参考答案:
1.例文:
An unforgettable experience
I had a very unforgettable experience on a Sunday.
It was a bright, sunny day. Our school closed for the day. And my friends and I swam together happily. It was very interesting. Then I went to the biggest and the deepest water area of the swimming pool. Next a terrible thing happened. You can’t imagine how strange it was. My leg had a problem and I couldn’t swim. I was very fearful. It was very dangerous. Then my friends swam to me and saved me. He saved my life. I was out of danger. I said: “Thank you! Thank you very much!” My friends and I walked home together in silence.
This is my unforgettable experience. It’s very terrible. I couldn’t forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:题干要求以“An unforgettable experience ”为题记录成长过程中一次令人难以忘怀的经历,或悲伤,或惊喜,或害怕,或自豪……。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明经历发生的时间;
第二步,具体阐述事情发生的经过,以及说明为什么难忘的原因;
第三步,总结,再次点明永远不会忘记,升华感情。
[亮点词汇]
① the biggest and the deepest最大的和最深的
② happened发生
③ out of danger脱离危险
④ in silence沉默地
[高分句型]
①Then I went to the biggest and the deepest water area of the swimming pool. (最高级句型:the+形容词最高级+of+范围)
②You can’t imagine how strange it was. (感叹句句型:how+形容词+主谓!)
2.One possible version
Giving is receiving
I’m a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming.
I like to help others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up the city parks. I go to the old people’s home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So I’m pretty popular there. I often visit the children’s hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I am good with children. I also give money to charities to help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving.
Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“付出即是收获”为主题进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段介绍自己;第二段介绍自己平时的爱心行为和感受;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
3.范文:
My growing pain
My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have a happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was from my parents. They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons. They didn’t allow me to play computer games or have outdoor activities with my friends.
I couldn’t stand the strict rules! So I wrote a letter and told my parents I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork. I would make good use of the time and try to do well in schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents, they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like.
Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文,写自己成长中的情况;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括成长遇到的各种各样的问题和烦恼。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍遇到的各种各样的问题和烦恼;
第二步,介绍对应问题的解决方案;
第三步,最后得出结论要善于沟通。
[亮点词汇]
① come to an end结束
② not only…but (also) 不但……而且……
③ allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
④ make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
① they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like. (that引导的宾语从句)
② Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.(不定式作后置定语)
4.
The best gift I have received
The best gift I’ve received is an English novel called The Hobbit. It was a gift for my 14th birthday from my friend Jimmy. Attracted by its well-designed cover page, I had great interest in reading it.
Though it was the first time I had read an English novel I found it was not that difficult to understand. Besides, I was surprised to find English could be so lively and interesting. It completely changed my idea about learning a foreign language. As a result, I made up my mind to read more novels in English.
Reading is always a wonderful time. The more I read, the more I know about the world. I’d like to thank my friend again for his fantastic gift.
【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,以The best gift I have received为题,结合所给提示,讲述自己和最喜爱的礼物之间的故事。
写作指导:时态用一般过去时,人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时,可分为三段式:首先点出自己最喜爱的礼物是什么,长什么样以及是谁在什么时候送的;然后重点阐述自己为什么喜欢它;最后进行总结。注意上下文衔接,无拼写和语法错误。
5.例文
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给思维导图的提示,以“科技改变生活”为主题,写一篇作文介绍身边的科技及其优点。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内,可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技:智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥,行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
6.例文
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I! Let me share mine.
There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life. How time flies! Three years of middle school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates. Thanks to them, my middle school life is meaningful and colourful. One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8. I worked hard to prepare an English Speech. However, things didn’t went on as smoothly as expected. I fell ill a week before the speech. I coughed so badly that I could hardly speak. I felt worried and helpless. It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble. She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. To me, my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me. Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”,“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“An unforgettable thing”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“分享自己难忘的经历”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“发生了什么、情况如何、做了什么、感觉如何以及从这次经历中得到了什么”几个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②come to an end结束
③Thanks to由于,幸亏
④get out of trouble逃离困境,摆脱麻烦
[高分句型]
①I coughed so badly that I could hardly speak.(so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
②Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.(when引导的时间状语从句)
7.例文:
The Return of Chinese Traditional Festivals
In recent years, some young people are keen to celebrate Halloween and other Western festivals. On the contrary, China’s major traditional festivals have been “neglected”. I think we Chinese people should first like our Chinese festivals. Because they represent our traditional culture and spirit. They can not only promote Chinese culture, but also let our culture store itself. I hope we can pay more attention to our traditional festivals at ordinary times, and at the same time, TV should also increase the publicity of these festivals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,属于材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章标题以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇说明观察到的现象——年轻人热衷于庆祝万圣节等西方节日而“冷落”了中国的各大传统节日;
第二步,说明你对此现象的观点或想法;
第三步,提出你的建议或举措,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be keen to热衷于
②on the contrary正好相反
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think we Chinese people should first like our Chinese festivals.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
②I hope we can pay more attention to our traditional festivals at ordinary times, and at the same time, TV should also increase the publicity of these festivals.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句;and连接两个宾语从句)
8.例文
My Favorite Saying
My favorite saying is, “Only your real friends will tell you when your face is dirty”. It makes me think of my best friend. Her name is Li Xia. She’s serious about everything. She really cares about me and always tells me about my bad points to my face. Once, I couldn’t answer some difficult questions in a math test, so I opened the book and then wrote them down. Luckily, no one saw me. But after the test, Li Xia said she saw me open the book. She thought that it was not right for me to do that. My face turned red. Then she took out her notebook and showed me how to work out the problems. This is my best friend—a serious and caring girl.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文属于材料作文写作,要求以“My Favorite Saying”为题,按照说明文的格式介绍你最喜欢的一句格言,并以亲身经历举例说明你对这一句格言的理解或感悟。选择的格言可以是题干中所提供的,也可以是选择自己喜欢的。
2. 写作指导:本文采用第一人称为主来写,在介绍格言时采用一般现在时,在讲述亲身经历时则采用一般过去时。写作时先开篇点题,直接介绍你最喜欢的格言是哪一句;接着按照事情的经过进行叙述;最后点明此事件与格言的联系。举例讲述自己的亲身经历是这篇文章的重点内容,因此应详写,并注意时态的正确使用及事件叙述时的条理性和合理性。
9.例文
A new try
Every time we try something new, we will learn something and improve ourselves.
Last Sunday, I took part in a 1500-meter race which was a new try for me. It was also the first time for me to compete with others in front of so many people. I felt very nervous at first and fell behind others at the beginning. Though it seemed impossible to catch up, I tried my best to run fast and never thought of giving up. To my surprise, I won the first prize. I felt so happy.
I successfully challenged myself. It was such an amazing experience which has made me more confident.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“A new try”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般过去时为主。作文要分别介绍尝试做了什么,如何做的以及这次经历的感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
10.例文
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect” I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段引出主题,介绍自己对这句谚语的理解;第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面,解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
11.例文
One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day
As we all know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am.
I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I read with my friends. All in all, reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person.
Keeping reading helps me open up my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求以“One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称进行写作,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题,介绍自己坚持做的事;第二段写坚持做好这件事的原因以及给自己带来的影响;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
12.One possible version:
It’s common to have difficulties in life.
Once my English was poor. I couldn’t understand it very well and often got low marks in exams. What was worse, my parents only cared about my marks. So I felt much stressed.
I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to communicate with my parents and put my heart into English learning. I talked sincerely with my parents and often turned to my teachers or friends when I had trouble with my English. Now my parents support me and my English is getting better.
From it, I have learnt that we should manage to solve the problem bravely and take on challenges.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据要点提示写一篇英语短文;要求包含所有提示要点。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般过去时为主;采用第一人称;可采用4段落格式,第一段:文章已给出;第二段:阐述曾经遇到什么样的困难;第三段:阐述如何克服这个困难的;第四段:阐述学到了什么。
13.例文
I was not good at running and I failed the running test. I felt very sad and talked about it with my parents. They encouraged me not to give up and came up with a fitness plan.
In order to get up early in the morning, I set my clock at six in the morning. I tried my best to follow the plan and kept running every day. My parents also helped me a lot. They prepared healthy breakfast for me. With their help, I improved a lot and managed to pass the test finally. My parents were proud of me.
Everyone may meet with problems in study or life, but we should never give up and one day we will succeed. It works better when we think of good ways to solve them.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“自强不息”为主题写一篇文章,谈谈自己力求进步,自强不息做某事的经历,以及自己的感受。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主,辅以一般现在时。写作可采取三段式作文,先介绍自己的遇见的问题,接着介绍自己是如何努力解决问题,最后谈谈自己的感受和从此次经历中学习到了什么。写作要点齐全,内容完整,力求语言准确,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
14.例文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to recommend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.
Sandy is clever. She can do all the things well. She is hard-working, and always do extra work for class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets things she needs to do. She is helpful and ready to help others at any time. Sandy enjoys reading because she can learn a lot from books. Her favorite color is blue, which represents peace. When others are angry or too excited, it can often make them calm down.
I think Sandy is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Shirley
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为推荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,文章开头已给出,承接上文,详细介绍Sandy的性格和爱好;
第二步,表达自己对Sandy的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth.需要做某事
②be helpful to对……有用
③be ready to do sth.乐意做某事
④calm down平静下来
[高分句型]
①Sandy enjoys reading because she can learn a lot from books.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②Her favorite color is blue, which represents peace. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③When others are angry or too excited, it can often make them calm down.(when引导的时间状语从句)

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